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AthenaSurrenders -> RE: Another profile critique please (9/22/2013 1:16:13 AM)
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I would say that if you are just looking for a play partner, it is fine. There's a lot of details about the kinks you will and won't indulge in, which would be handy if I was just looking for someone to do a scene with me.
But your opening makes me think you are looking for a romantic relationship as well, and in that case you need to put something more about who you are and what you are looking for outside the bedroom.
I'd take out the huge checklist and the limits list - just keep them ready for when it comes up naturally in conversation. Start with who you are - personality, interests, dreams, life circumstances. Then what you seek - LTR? Eventual 24/7 TPE? Slap-and-tickle in the bedroom and equals outside? Fuck buddies? Next it's WHO you seek - someone adventurous or a quiet type? Someone who loves animals, had a great sense of humour, enjoys a political debate over breakfast? Lastly, if you want to, talk about kink, but just hit the highlights, they don't need to know your opinion of every type of spanking implement to know whether you are worth talking to. Leave something to talk about later. Example: 'I really enjoy spanking and role play scenes, and I am curious about playing at a public event for the first time.' Three sentences or so for each section is enough.
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