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TwistedTrouble -> Music of Pain (11/17/2004 10:38:25 AM)

Music Of Pain



A kane
strong and steady
a single-tail
snap and sting
a flogger
kissing like an angel
yet making Siren's sing
the kane
starts the rhythm
steady hard and true
the single tail
sets nerves alight
in every color n hue
then the flogger
picks up the music
though heard by just a few
the moans
are beginning
the song must be sung
the cries
become verses
made as pure as the Sun
the tremors
are the finale
for the Siren is Done




blushes4u -> RE: Music of Pain (11/17/2004 2:06:41 PM)

Very nice, thank you for sharing!!



fairymist -> RE: Music of Pain (11/17/2004 4:31:25 PM)

I enjoyed this poem very much. I am new to the lifestyle in Gor. Just thought I'd drop you a line and say well done.



theroebabe -> RE: Music of Pain (11/17/2004 7:31:38 PM)



Such a talented group of people here on the boards.

Thank you for sharing.



TwistedTrouble -> RE: Music of Pain (11/18/2004 12:56:07 AM)

thank you all
fairy you know i've wanted to go into the gor side of things just looking for someone to take me through it
Twisted



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