TigressLily
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It's his 2nd paragraph now, and I don't know how much he's changed his profile since you took a look, but I find it an awful read throughout. quote:
ORIGINAL: peppermint .... I'll offer you one bit of advice. That first paragraph of your profile is awfully negative. Just delete it. No need to bring negativity to a profile. The rest of your profile is just fine. OP, just telling you this for your own good. You say you're a sub, but you don't communicate with once ounce of humility. You might not care, but as a Domme, even if you were age-appropriate and located nearby, I would pass you over in an instant. Does anybody need to know this about you? "I don't think I let it control me and turn into a mindless cock-zombie but I do find the need to masturbate usually several times a day and it's just a central part of my personality." Nowhere do you intimate you are looking for a relationship, you have multiple paragraphs outlining how you expect a Domme to meet your demands, then you challenge a Dominant female to dominate you in so many words. Insolent little bastard, is my first impression, and I don't think that what's you intend to convey, is it? Practically any other standard "do-me" sub's profile is better than yours. I have a sinking feeling, though, that you are too egotistical to change it. Good luck with that and welcome.
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