MasterCaneman
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Good advice all, and I've tried a lot of those suggestions. Here's what happens in my bubble of bone. I get the idea, and tell myself the story in my head. Then, when I get home or somewhere I have a writing pad, I jot down a rough outline. Then, I fire up my computer and the first third seems to just happen. Then I start bogging down. Ed, I entertain no illusions about making money off of this (but it would be nice). Most of what I write is purely to entertain me, because it's what I want to read and no one else has written it for me, if that makes any sense. I have one article online now, and I've done a few articles when I was back in college, but nothing more. I've toyed with the idea of submitting articles to the weekly paper, but my problem with endings always crop up. That and word counts. Everyone can tell from my posting style that I like putting words on the screen. And DS, I've tried that too, only to have the same problem in reverse. I write a great ending, and now I have to retcon the entire story to fit. It does have validity, I just haven't learned how to work it out yet. I tried the recorder thing, but it just ended up as a collection of meaningless rambles, many of which I wouldn't want to risk having a casual observer overhearing due t the subject matter. Moonhead, if you could browse my writings folder, I've got plenty of bad examples already. They all have little nuggets of what I think are genius, only that they're trapped in a puddle of muck I can't extricate them from. All the suggestions are good, great even, and others have made points I intend to exploit shamelessly. I'll wrap up that gawdawful piece I have posted here (I've been pecking away at it) in the near future. And I never bother with editing while I'm doing it, and I tend to lay them aside and re-read them to get the feel of the vignette again before making changes. Thanks to all for the input.
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