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gooddogbenji -> RE: poetry (7/8/2006 5:12:54 PM)
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Enigma,
A few notes:
1: Some people will not listen to your request for no mean comments.
2: Creating a thread to share poetry without critiquing is, in my mind, somewhat dull, as no comments can be made at all, lest someone interpret a positive comment about one as a relative negative comment on another (Why didn't I get a compliment)
I feel that if you want to show your poetry, do so. Some will find it good, some will find it bad, some will find any poetry nauseating (as demonstrated) and some will not care. However, your no mean comments clause is akin to a child sticking their fingers in their ears and singing loudly.
That having been said,
A week ago, at half past nine,
I saw a fellow in a line.
I asked him, "Sir, if you allow
your pretty girlfriend I could plow."
He looked at me, he downright stared,
His girlfriend, well, she hardly cared.
I beat him up, I took her home,
and read her a romantic poem.
And as we lay, upon the grass,
she asked me if I'd fuck her ass.
Oblige I did, and so it went
Both she and I became soon spent.
This girlfriend, she and I are paired
the fellow, well, I never cared.
Yours,
benji
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