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ecstasys -> A Slaves View (5/21/2014 11:56:02 PM)

on my knees i gain new prespective
i achieved a sense of me
on my knessa head held high
eyes gazeing downwards
is where i chose to be.

Sitting straight i feel His Presence
His Shadow shields me from Harm
leaning close with head upon His
chest i hear His Heartbeat
under His Gaze i begin to yield
this is where i chose to be.

His wishes are my purpose
His Commands I obey
His Voice drowns the world
out around me
at His Feet is where i wish
to stay Forever.




~ecstasys~ written 7/8/99




ecstasys -> RE: A Slaves View (5/22/2014 1:21:14 AM)

this is only person view & poem from the heart ,




crazyml -> RE: A Slaves View (5/22/2014 1:25:27 AM)

It is lovely.

Only nit pick, is that "gazeing" should be "gazing"




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