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SinFix -> Profile (8/21/2014 10:50:47 AM)

Okay everybody, I revamped my profile and would appreciate any feedback.



Gauge -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 1:17:52 PM)

quote:

What I am is strong, independent, honest, confident, loyal, respectful, open minded and utterly amazing (okay, I threw the last one in cause well I am).


I would edit that for clarity and a few other parts as well, but overall it is very clear and gets your point across. The only other thing that I would point out is the spacing between paragraphs, there is too much space there. Granted that is a little nitpicky, but the additional space makes it feel choppy and it doesn't have the kind of flow you might like.

Feel free to make any changes, any opportunity to perv your profile is welcome. [:)]



SinFix -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 1:37:30 PM)

Thank you, when typing it out on the other side the spacing doesn't look as far apart I guess...

Though I am confused on how to change that part for clarity?



Gauge -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 1:39:23 PM)

I am not certain we should get into it on this side, would you mind if I private messaged you?



SinFix -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 1:54:34 PM)

Yeah, that is fine.



mnottertail -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 2:24:34 PM)

I think it is the complexity of your phrasing, which could run a little tighter. (says the man who is a stream of conciousness guy and puts the cart before the horse always............)



SinFix -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 2:39:26 PM)

Yeah pretty much... :-).
Putting my thoughts down into words has always been difficult for me... I tend to have too many and they get scattered so getting them organized into something readable is a chore.



mnottertail -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 2:54:42 PM)

I am sure that was what gageU was nattering on about in your privates.



DarkSteven -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 10:19:05 PM)

I found it confusing. You start off by saying that you're looking for some kind of dynamic, but you're not sure what that is. To me, that means you want a relationship but will modify it based upon the right man when you meet him.

Then at the end you say that your profile is only for forum chat, which I take to mean that you're not available for a relationship.

Also, you need more pics, preferably more revealing ones. :)



SinFix -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 10:38:25 PM)

Oh damn. That last part was the old profile that I didn't delete out...
Modifying to fit a guy no.. but most messages always ask what I am looking for and well I can't quite give a specific answer to that yet...



DaddySatyr -> RE: Profile (8/21/2014 11:29:08 PM)


I've got to start with something DarkSteven said:

quote:

ORIGINAL: DarkSteven

I found it confusing. You start off by saying that you're looking for some kind of dynamic, but you're not sure what that is.



This speaks to something a bit deeper and I was tempted to message this privately but, I guess it's not overly personal.

I'm concerned for you and any potential partner. I may be over-simplifying but, I don't think so. If you don't know what type of relationship you want, are you ready for a relationship?

I can tell you that every person I know needed to be sure of what they were looking for before they could have a successful relationship.







Screen captures still RULE! Ya feel me?



DarkSteven -> RE: Profile (8/22/2014 4:19:15 AM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: SinFix

Oh damn. That last part was the old profile that I didn't delete out...
Modifying to fit a guy no.. but most messages always ask what I am looking for and well I can't quite give a specific answer to that yet...


Makes sense. You know what you want in vague terms but the nitty gritty depends both on the man himself, and on how you feel about your relationship with him.



SinFix -> RE: Profile (8/22/2014 5:18:14 AM)

Daddysatyr- you raise a valid concern. Though I am not sure I could explain it in a comprehensive manner, I do hope you get the gist of what I am trying to say.
Darksteven- I think that kinda of sums it up but I will try to convey my thoughts on this matter below.

I do know what I want/need in a guy, I know what I need as the foundation of a relationship. What I am not quite able to define is the (for a lack of a better wording) the over all flow or feel of the relationship.



mnottertail -> RE: Profile (8/22/2014 8:03:28 AM)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RXARHZmpgvw

Something like this, or more beatings?



DarkSteven -> RE: Profile (8/22/2014 8:12:32 AM)

Well, maybe there are some things you could rule out.

Are you open to

LDRs?
LTRs, or one night stands?
FWBs?
Married men?
Poly?
Submission in the bedroom/outside the bedroom/both?
Men within any age range?
A man who hates outdoor activities?
Men who are not fit, and who eat junk food all day?





LookieNoNookie -> RE: Profile (8/22/2014 6:25:24 PM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: SinFix

Okay everybody, I revamped my profile and would appreciate any feedback.


I noticed there's nothing in there about devoting 35% of your income to my personal happiness.

I find that somewhat distressing, frankly.



ShaharThorne -> RE: Profile (8/22/2014 10:29:20 PM)

Lookie, you don't need to be taken care off financially...that would make you a tool.



LookieNoNookie -> RE: Profile (8/23/2014 8:19:00 PM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: ShaharThorne

Lookie, you don't need to be taken care off financially...that would make you a tool.


I could be a tool.

Tools are useful devices.

I find that cash makes me vastly more useful.



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