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Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 12:35:07 AM   
Sasy


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Status: offline 		I am sure this has be done many  times before ...  but the word sentence thing got my mind rolling (  probally straight into  the gutter ) Add a paragraph or a line your choice

She stood on the balcony only the moonlight against her skin, she closed her eyes as she heard the sliing door open. Her body quivered as she remembered his words .... Lil one tonight will be like no other ...........
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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 12:47:33 AM   
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Status: offline 		She turned around, and saw the form of the man that had been part of her dreams and nightmares for too many years, in the doorway.  His form was in the shadows, but she didn't need light to know the countors of his body. She knew them all too well.

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 12:55:00 AM   
Sasy


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Status: offline 		She didnt speak as he held out his hand, she laid her hand in his. She took a deep breath as her drew her to him. Quickly he spun her around so she again had her back to him........

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 12:56:46 AM   
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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 1:00:56 AM   
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Status: offline 		She could feel his heart beating erratically inside his chest, and her own hearbeat sped up to match his.

He reached into his back pocket and slid out the length of rope he had put there for just this occasion.

She started to breathe heavily when she felt the rough braid of the rope against the sensitive skin of her wrists.

"Shhhhhhhhhh," he whispered in her ear, in hopes to calm her down. He knew she was ready for this; he had been ready for years.

Edited because i think faster than i type.


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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 1:28:28 AM   
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Status: offline 		He had watch her coming and going. He knew just when the attack would be ripe. With her wrist bound, he makes sure her legs and secure, for his pleasure and delight.
He approch her like a tiger approching is prey.

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 1:45:42 AM   
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Status: offline 		She was scared, but breathless with anticipation. She had waited for this for what seemd like forever. She knew she could trust him ....or could she? This question turning in her mind, over and over, she suddenly heard the words whispered in her ear: " This will be a night like no other for you. You will remember this forever, I promise you". She shivered as his free hand ran softly up and down her right thigh, caressing it like someone petting a soft kitten.

- Susan

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 1:48:44 AM   
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Status: offline 		Then suddenly, he heard a noise, not unlike a faulty ice maker in a sea of bad appliances.   "Stay put, I'm going to check" he said as the soft velour of her brick red eyebrows painted an unknowing silence on the sinuey haze of the moment...."I'm coming with you".

He pondered the significance of her comment.  She had always been the one to manage all the household appliances.  She was the one that wanted a Kenmore double duty side by side, but you had to be the BIG man and get a JennAirre with ice maker.

And who ordered it in last years colors, not even considering whether "Autumn Cammamber" would go with the "Seabreeze Excelsior" of the oven fan housing?

(That would be you).  I felt the complete fool and suddenly so all alone in the world.

Already, on the singularly most important day of the year, the LAST day of the warranty had arrived, and you were out of cell phone minutes!  Once again your selfish decisions were coming back to haunt you, and there wasn't a damn thing you could do about it.

And now others would suffer because of your selfishness.

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 2:40:22 AM   
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Status: offline 		In that moment, he ordered her to be still, and silent. She began to feel the tightness of her body  bound, and realized she had no control over what he might do.....

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 2:50:31 AM   
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Status: offline 		To prove that she was at his mercy. He brought forth a knife, sweet and sharp. Not to cut his cut prey, his toy. but to tease and temp her. To fine pleasure in watching her squirm, and wiggle in bonds. He gingerly slides the knife down her back and her legs going just inside the spot where her hot female honey lies waiting and wanting.

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 2:50:37 AM   
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Status: offline 		She wanted to turn around, to see his face, but it seemed as if he were anticipating her actions. Before she even moved a muscle, he was there, behind her, his arm around her stomach, stopping her from turning.

"Do not make me blind fold you," He said softly.

She knew he was angry, why? that, she didn't know. But she could feel the tension in his body, and the way the arm that held her pinned against him, tightened ever so slightly.

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 5:33:43 AM   
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Status: offline 		Suddenly, the doorbell rang - even though it was 2a.m. It was the Jennaire repair guy. "Damn they are good"! he said. "Well, she thought to herself, maybe he is more than just a hot body - maybe he has brains, too! Am I lucky, or what?!" she thought to herself.

(sorry, I couldn't resist, due to LTRsubNW)...

- Susan 

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 5:53:28 AM   
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Status: offline 		But he had only arrived because he heard desertdancer had made cake for the Tamer fanclub members and to meet the world famous dominant collector Wulfchyld along with his collection of panties who came to bribe Scooter Clause to get him a LaTigress clone for Christmas.

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 5:59:20 AM   
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Status: offline 		Wow, twicehappy. That's a tough act to follow.  

- Susan

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 6:24:46 AM   
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Status: offline 		To his surprise he found Susanofo doing the happy dance naked which he mistook for the i gotta pee dance so he rushed her to the ladies room where......

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 6:42:20 AM   
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Status: offline 		she exclaimed: " No! You fool! It was the Happy Dance! The Happy Dance!"
Realizing his error, he puts her down, kisses her bare feet, and begs her forgiveness.
SusanofO then says to him........
 
 

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 7:10:34 AM   
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Status: offline 		"Will you please, please, please pick up where you left off? Please tie me up? - I need it. I want it. You were doing that...I will do anything you want of me if you continue. Then I will do the Double Grateful Happy Dance! And -  you know what that usually means...it means that later, if you want to do it too, of course, we will ...blah, blah..."

He just stared down at her. His eyes were becoming like big, silver darts - the words "topping from the bottom" entered his mind and he became annoyed with her.

Suddenly, he took a large ice cube from the Jennaire fridge and he... realized that Artimis Black and twicehappy and several other people at collarme given him reallly good advice recently about the many things he coud do with ice cubes in bdsm situations. 

He looked down at her, ice cube in hand, wondering if she really did deserve him..and then....even though the Jennaire repair guy was still in the kitchen and watching them both (enraptured, I might add), then...

- Susan

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 8:01:19 AM   
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Status: offline 		...and then, as if on command, a spear plunged through the living room window.  A striking noise, shattering the painful silence.

It had a note attached.

"Read it" she implored.  Carefully I moved like a cat against the wall through the front hall, around the entry duvet where I place my keys, with more care than I've ever given to reading the sports section, tiptoeing over the expanded metal coffee table as if I had sprung wings, I could see it. 

There it was.  It was right over there.  A little left of exactly "right over there" but fairly close to what I'd think would be easily described as pretty close to almost in the middle of the right side of approximately just about (within a few inches anyway) of "right over there".

The light from the street shone on it as if it were...oh...you know, kind of like a message attached to a spear that had been flung through our window only moments ago.

Was I actually hearing angels singing?

It said "Mary, I can't go out with you tonight, I miss you so much but my car has 3 radials and one bias ply and I just feel embarrassed.  I'm sorry, this night was going to be special.  I promise I love you, truly, deeply, with all the passion of every lover that's ever existed before".

I looked over to my wife and said "Who the FUCK is Mary???????"

She looked askance, trembling in anticipation and then uttered "How the fuck am I supposed to know, and why the hell is the JennAirre man here at damn near 4 in the morning? ('damn he looks fine' she was thinking as she stroked his cock)"

And then suddenly I remembered, we had a guest.  What an idiot I am.  Why hadn't I offered him some tea?

I looked over, aware of all my surroundings, and was about make amends, when suddenly another spear came through the window, yet another note.

It landed directly in my left palm.  Fortunately I'm right handed. Damn that fucker hurt.

"Mary, you cum guzzling gutter slut, I can see that other man inside with you, we are SOOOOOO done.  Don't even try to apologize.  I can't believe I ever wanted you.  Goodbye whore".

"WTF????" I thought.

Then another spear "Mary, I'm sorry...really I am...I'm not kidding...Ooops...big mistake on my part...I'm feeling pretty dumb now...yepper, I'm a dumb shit, sorry about that...hey, this whole spear thing isn't pissing you off or anything is it?"

It was at that moment I got up the courage to lean out of what remained of the corner of my front window and yelled..."HEY you dumb son of a bitch!!!! There's no Mary living here!!! Quit it with the spears already, okay???"

Another spear.  This one landed in my shoulder.  (Where's the hell does someone get this damn many spears?).

The note said "Isn't this 11475 279th Avenue NE...the Wilkersons house?"

"Uhm....Nooooooooooo you shithead, they're one block over on 280th!" I yelled.

A voice near my prize winning rose bushes squeeked..."Oh....sorry man...my bad...hey, you really should get that window fixed...later dudes".

But the calm that came over me as resolution finally reared its head would only last a moment. I was about to discover something that could only be described as.....







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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 8:10:34 AM   
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Status: offline 		Your writing is pricelssly funny LTRsubNW! I will write more, but I need time to think (you are sooo funny!!!). Maybe someone else can continue this for jsut awhile. I cannot wait to read more. This is just too great.

- Susan

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RE: Lets write a story - 7/12/2006 5:15:57 PM   
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Status: offline 		I am hoping someone else will let their creative juicees flow in this thread - I am going to later, but am fresh out of energy right now. Doesn't anyone else want to play this game? It's a great game!! Too funny. Read it - wait until you get near the end, it's a scream..!

- Susan


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