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chainedpoet -> Have I dis-pleased you? (11/24/2004 8:55:41 AM)

Have I dis-pleased you ?
Has this one failed?
Do you have the feelings
that you once held?
Do your arms still open when at your feet I lay?
Am I still the one
with which you will play?
Does the service please you that I learned to give
Am I still the one...
with you will I live?
So have I dis-pleased you in any form or way?
For with out your guidance I will not live another day.
Please let me seve you and do right
Always to be with you
in those beautiful nights




theroebabe -> RE: Have I dis-pleased you? (11/24/2004 3:13:29 PM)


Again thoughts which we all have at some point i think. thanks for articulating them so well.





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