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She needs to grow up. An unfinished tale. - 11/5/2014 12:36:35 PM   
camille65


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This is unfinished because well, I never finish stories and it is unedited because well, I'm lazy. :D First draft, only draft. And one of the first times I've shared any of my fiction! As always my fictional characters are over 18. (please be gentle with criticism)





His voice spoke into my ear "I want you on that table. I want you on all fours and with your bottom sticking up. Then you will show everyone your pretty little holes."

I blinked and felt a moment of defiance but at his steely gaze I remembered just why I was here. See, I'd pushed too hard. I'd always been spoiled (and honestly, I deserved every moment of it) and gotten away with everything I did. So I did what I wanted. When I failed my freshman year at college my father told me he was done with me. Just because I'd failed and run up 10K on my credit card! Well there was the drunk driving accident where I totaled my little blue Beemer and that 'thing' with Professor Kelton but it's not like I hurt anyone.

My father said I had one more chance, that he'd enrolled me in a private small school with an emphasis on discipline. That either I learned to behave like an adult or he would cut me off. I had to stay here a full two semesters and pass everything! So unfair! But no way was I getting my allowance cut off, so here I was.

At first everything seemed fine. It was co-ed but I hadn't seen any boys yet even though I was looking. The girls dorm was a really pretty and really big Victorian house and we each got our own room, then I saw the bathroom. All the toilets and showers were in the open! When I said "No fucking way!" to Carly who was taking me around, she gasped.

"You can't swear here Gabrielle, you get punished for that. Didn't you read the brochure when you got here?"

Why would I read the brochure? I almost said that but just mumbled something instead and telling myself to read that brochure, post haste. Within twenty minutes I was laying on my bed with the brochure spread out in front of me. Jesus. Not only was there a very long list of stupid rules, there was a very long list of punishments! My stomach went sort of funny reading the punishments, they ranged from a spanking which I hadn't had since I was about four to something very strange sounding. It just said Standard Room. Even though just thinking about being spanked made me feel strange I figured it probably couldn't be that bad.

Along with the brochure I'd been given a stack of text book and papers, flipping through them I saw I was supposed to read the first chapter of each by morning. Well sorry but I had better things to do! I'm smart, I can catch up or bluff when I need to. I returned to my bed and laid down on my back. Slowly I pulled up my skirt to my waist, I slid my fingers under my panties just teasing the very top of my slit. Boy was I wet. Wetter than usual. My clit fairly ached with need and using two fingers I pinched then stroked hard. Oh god it feels so good, so slippery warm wet. Faster my fingers went and my eyes shut tight. Just as I lifted up my hips, just as I was about to cum, the door flew open hard enough to hit the wall. My eyes widened as I took in the sight of the Head Mistress!

"Disgusting! You are disgusting and your father said you were out of control. Gabrielle stand up this instant!" With every hard word she took a step closer, ending up at the side of my bed staring down at me in shock over what she'd just seen. "You're a slut. A dirty little girl with no self control. Well young lady, trust me when I tell you that from now on 'self control' will be your middle name. You. Will. Learn. Discipline."

I stood there feeling beet red and angry. "You have no right to barge in here! And masturbation is normal it isn't dirty!" Oh crap did I say that out loud? By the look on her face, yes.. yes I had said that. Out loud.

"As per the rules Gabrielle and as per your fathers instructions you're now going to receive the first level of punishment. Maybe then you will start off on the right foot." She grabbed me by the elbow and took me over to the desk chair where she sat down expectantly. "Well? Over my lap little girl."

Numbly I bent over her thighs, my head hanging down with the blood rushing to it. One of her hands pressed me down hard against her legs, the other hand yanked up my skirt. All I could think was thank God I had panties on still! Which was fine until she started to pull them down!

"No no no please I'm sorry not on my bare ass please!"

"Using the word ass instead of the more ladylike bottom will cost you ten spanks." As she uttered the last word she emphasized that with an actual spank, it made me jump and go hot inside. I bit my lower lip as the second spank landed on my ass cheeks.

"Spoiled" *spank!*
"Child" *spank!*
"Will" *spank!*
"Learn" *spank!* Then she began to spank my poor flesh harder and faster. It wasn't quite so bad toward the top of my ass but when she hit the lower part it really stung! Soon I began to wiggle and gasp, heat and pain was flooding me making it impossible to think of anything. I shifted and tried to tense up, that's when I felt just how very wet I was getting between my legs. I was scared she would notice and stop spanking me. I was scared she wouldn't stop spanking me! I loved it and hated it.

Her hand began to move down the backs of my thighs, rhythmically spanking my skin and making me hotter inside. I don't know if I meant to or not but suddenly I found myself spreading my legs for this hand that was causing me pain and crazy arousal. I didn't know what I wanted, I just.. wanted. Needed. Wetness was flooding out of me.

The moment her hand connected with my wetness everything stopped. I was teary, breathing hard and feeling so very confused. She pressed her hand hard against my cunt then of all things, I heard her laugh softly.

"Oh my, you're one of the special girls aren't you." It didn't seem like an actual question so I stayed quiet and still over her lap. Her hand slide further resting against the top of my pubic bone and I wanted to grind against her so badly. It took everything I had (see, I do too have self control!) to remain still. Her whole demeanor had changed. The one hand holding down my back now slowly moved to my burning ass, her other hand continued to press against my sopping slit. The hand over my ass began to rub soothing circles, making me sigh and relax.

"Mmmm yes, yes you are one of the special ones. We get a girl like you every once in a while you know, a girl who rebels but really wants nothing more than to be controlled." One of her fingers trailed down the crack of my ass, sliding over the puckered hole and dipping into my waiting cunt hole. I couldn't help it, I gasped and lifted myself to her. "I wonder if you'd like an audience or hate an audience little Gabrielle?" She laughed again, my pussy had tightened just as she started her question. In my head I suddenly pictured a dozen curious eyes around me and despite the sensation of shame it brought, I orgasmed. I orgasmed so hard right there over this womans lap after being spanked and fingered.

I went limp over her lap as her hand rubbed my juices over my burning asscheeks. I felt exhausted. I felt strange! Lightheaded. Everything had happened so fast and my brain couldn't catch up. Her fingers spread my wetness from the top of my slit to the top of my ass crack. Gently, steadily. Making the heat inside of me start to build again. Without warning she delivered one final spank that made a loud sound in the now quiet room.

"Up you go now. Tomorrow morning I want you to report to Mr Delmere for your first... class."

I nodded to her, still dazed and unsure of what happened. The Head Mistress stood up and walked out as if everything were ordinary and normal. Nothing was normal. Least of all me. I wanted to cum again but didn't dare to touch myself this time.

Even though it was early, I was exhausted so I crawled into bed with my very sore ass.

The next morning after breakfast I asked a girl for Mr Delemere's class. She gave me a look of surprise for some reason but directed me to the second floor of the main building. I could see her whispering to another girl as I walked away but shrugged it off. It only took a few minutes to find the right door, at least it said it was his room but there was just a teacher there. No students. An old teacher. He had to totally be in his forties, dressed in a suit and tie he sat behind his desk watching me as I walked in.

"Um. I was told to be here? By the Head Mistress? Are you Mr Delemere?" I stood self-consciously in my new school uniform, well most of it. My ass still hurt so I hadn't put on the dorky white panties, just thinking that made me want to tug the skirt down a bit more. Glancing around the room I saw rows of desks in front of his, and next to his desk was something pretty big covered in a sheet like thing.

He put the piece of paper he'd been reading face down and gave me a smile that didn't reach his eyes.

"You are Gabrielle." His eyes slowly moved from my head down to my feet, his lack of emotion made me want to move so I wasn't looking at him but I felt so unsure about things that I simply stood there and nodded to him. "I've been notified by Head Mistress Lang that you are an interesting case"

I blushed, wondering just what she had told him and looked down at my shoes. Surely she didn't tell this man that I'd cum? Oh god just thinking about it made me start to get moist, and I had no panties on. Worrying, I pressed my thighs together hard and tried to think of something else.

"Yes she said you reacted well to your first spanking and she thinks you'd be a good candidate for our fast track. That means you could do two semesters in just one semesters time." He looked at me, watching my reaction which of course was to be interested. I began to nod, not knowing what the fast track was nor really caring what it was. I just wanted to get back to normal life!

He beckoned me to the front of his desk and continued "With that in mind, I need you to review the contract that you signed for us. The contract your father also signed. Promising that you'd stick out the course here or be cut off financially." As he spoke he waved a copy of that same contract at me, as if I could have forgotten what it said! I'd never seen my father so angry because I'd always been his princess, but I'd gone too far with some things and was beginning to realize that.

"Yes, I remember the contract"

"Sir"

I looked up in surprise, I'd never called ANYONE sir before! "Yes.. yes.. Sir."

He smiled again, this time a warmer smile obviously pleased with me. "You also remember that you signed over complete control of yourself to this school?"

The very way he said 'control' made me shiver slightly and he rocked back in his chair. "I see she was correct in her estimation of you, but then she usually is. When a young woman like you comes along we take special notice. Some girls Gabrielle break, some bend and a very very few eagerly submit even before understanding why they do so. You give every indication of being the latter and that is something we take great pleasure in expanding."

I still didn't understand but I could feel my heart racing, I could feel my wetness. I felt embarrassed but wanted to hear more, luckily he was about to tell me more.

"Ms Lang told me that you had an interesting reaction last night when she was forced to discipline you, that she found you in an indecent position Gabrielle." At this he frowned and pulled a riding crop from beneath his desk. He laid it on his desk, his eyes never leaving mine. "While it is interesting that being spanked over her knee made you orgasm, you need to learn that you cannot just do that when you choose"

I tried to swallow but my throat was too dry. God. She has told him. He knew! I could barely concentrate on the last part of what he was saying because I was busy wanting to sink through the floor. It became too much for me and I felt tears start. This strange older man stroking the riding crop stared steadily at me as I choked back confused tears.

"Lean over my desk dear and grab the other side with your hands." He rose as he spoke, coming around to the front of the desk where I was standing mutely. It felt like I was someone else as he bent me over the desk. My hands slowly moved to the opposite side and he bound them with straps I hadn't even noticed until now. I lifted my head and looked at him.

"I'm scared Sir."

"What are you scared of Gabrielle?" He stopped and placed his hand on the back of my head, gently but firmly making me keep eye contact.

"I'm not sure" I hiccuped as a tear rolled down my cheek. "I don't understand what is happening or what I'm feeling! So I'm scared!"

He moved out of my visual range and I felt my skirt being lifted. He tsked at my lack of panties and I felt myself blush again.

"Gabrielle, you are a sexual submissive. There is nothing wrong with that and in fact it is something that a lot of people prize. You've been rebelling for so long that you don't realize how good it feels to be an obedient girl. You need guidance and correction, that is what we are here to do for you and to you." I listened to his words as his large hands pressed my knees a part. I was terrified he would see my wet cunt and terrified he would ignore it. One hand patted my ass.

"I'm going to crop you now. It won't be terribly hard this time and I want you to concentrate on how you feel. Can you do that Gabrielle?"

At this point I could barely breathe through the apprehension, much less concentrate but I nodded. I tugged at the leather bands holding my wrists still, I felt the cool breeze on my opened legs. Without warning I felt the sharp CRACKKKKK of the crop against my ass and I yelped in shock. That hurt! I twisted my head around and looked at Mr Delmere standing just to the side and behind me with the black riding crop in his hand. Again it came down hard on my ass, CRACKKKKK! Then again and a fourth time until I was crying.

"Keep your legs open Gabrielle, I like seeing how wet you are getting" came his words to me in a fog of pain. I strained to keep my legs a part, knowing for sure he could see all of me at this point. The tip of the crop slid down the crack of my ass and coming to rest just at the opening of my pussy. Very lightly he circled the opening and that made me go up onto my tiptoes. "Oh now that is a good girl! See Gabrielle, you need this. You want this."

The crop was pulled away making me shift around until it landed again but this time on my wet slit. Not terribly hard but definitely hard enough to get my attention! I gasped and lifted onto my toes again.

Four more lashings of the crop fell across my now burning ass before he paused again. I waited and wanted for the crop to tease my pussy hole, I arched my back to give him access. All I could do was react to my body and my body wanted more. Instead of where I wanted it, I felt the tip of the crop press against my asshole. He spun it there making me whimper out loud.

"Gabrielle I want an honest answer from you, you're no virgin but I need to know if your tight little bottomhole has ever been used by yourself or anyone else?"

"Oh my god" I burned in humiliation. He was staring at that little hole! I shook my head frantically, no no no nobody had ever played back there. No!

The crop tapped back there making me squirm, one final light smack directly on my hole and he stepped back.

"Good. That will be tomorrows lesson in self control and submission." Briskly he strode around the table and undid my wrists. I looked up at him with a tear streaked face and wondered what I'd done wrong. He must have read the question in my eyes. "I know you wanted to cum but I said earlier that you no longer choose when you cum. It is chosen for you."

With a pat on my red sore ass he flipped my skirt back down.

"You've an all afternoon session in the Standard Room, and tomorrow I want you back here at the same time as today."

Apparently I was dismissed. With shaky legs I slowly walked out of Mr. Delmeres room.

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RE: She needs to grow up. An unfinished tale. - 11/5/2014 6:44:52 PM   
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Interesting. She asks for gentleness then posts a story about getting off on a lack of gentleness. Hmmm . . .

How bout I just be honest but I should note that as I write this it is nine thirty at night but my clock is stopped at twenty after four.

Now for my review: I got half a stiffy. Seriously. The part where Mr. Delmere (what an awesome job he has) tells her that she is a natural submissive definitely stirred a feeling. I could go whack off right now if I wanted to but I'd just rather not bother tonight (you know you're in your forties when you have the option). So far I've only spotted one typo (you're missing the apostrophe and the S in the last line). Quite frankly I'm a little envious. I'm mildly dyslexic so I am the typo king.

As for not finishing stories you've started, well, I can't criticize too hard because it is a bad habit of mine too. You just get kind of bored with the story after you've gone over for the 127th time. But I have managed to finish one story (HINT, HINT, HINT - shameless, I know, but you know how needy we writer types are) so I can't be too lenient here. I am afraid I am going to have to strap you to a desk for a session with the crop. Then, after I am done, All the Collarme regulars who want a turn can line up for a go at your ass. I'm willing to bet the Exiled Tyrant will be first in line.

Oh, by the way, I'm glad you found your old pic. Now I DEFINITELY remember you - and it is good to have you back.





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RE: She needs to grow up. An unfinished tale. - 11/5/2014 7:01:41 PM   
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Thanks Marc!

One day I will finish one of my stories, maybe lol. I tend to get tangled up in the story itself, it isn't that I get bored (because honestly I don't edit, I posted what I wrote and I never paused when writing) I think I get bogged down by potential endings. Plus the line can blur between what I'm writing and my brain/who I am.

Which is why I want gentle criticism but Gabrielle is fine without it lol.

My apostrophe history is awful, I always seem to be forgetting those. The key is in an awkward place for my fingers so I skip using them too often.

And it is nice to be back! Even nicer that some remember me. :)

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RE: She needs to grow up. An unfinished tale. - 11/7/2014 8:07:22 AM   
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Really liked your story. Can't wait to see what else is in store for her.

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RE: She needs to grow up. An unfinished tale. - 11/7/2014 8:19:43 AM   
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Hey thanks! Unfortunately there is no ending, no next chapter. At least not at this time. I'd promise another chapter but that would be a broken promise lol. But thank you for the feedback, it is appreciated.

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