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poems (don't go to the other one! lol)


My Rescuers
  0% (0)
Someone Once Told Me
  10% (1)
When You said Goodbye
  10% (1)
I Will
  0% (0)
Hard Questions
  10% (1)
Strange
  20% (2)
I Thought I liked You
  0% (0)
A Cry for Help
  10% (1)
3 little words
  0% (0)
None of the above
  40% (4)


Total Votes : 10


(last vote on : 7/27/2006 11:21:16 AM)
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poems (don't go to the other one! lol) - 7/17/2006 11:06:25 AM   
MarksFantasyGirl


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Hello everyone... I love poetry... and I wanted to know what people think of these poems... pick your favorite...

My Rescuers
You guys were there for me when I needed you most.
You never judged me by the words I said, or the things I did.
You have always treated me like an equal and nothing less.
You listened to me when I thought bad thoughts.
you comforted me when the rest of the world turned it's back on me.
You treated me right when everyone else was putting me down.
You don't know how much that means to me to know that you care.
You have never run out on me beacause you didn't want to worry about MY problems when you had your own to think about.
You guys are like brothers to me, and I hope that never changes
You mean the world to me, and for that, I thank you all
 
Someone Once Told me
Someone one told me,
someone once said,
That best friends last forever
and true love never dies.
Someone once told me,
Someone once said.
I am the key to the future
and I only get out of life what I put into it
But No one ever told me,
No one ever said.,
how much it hurts to fall for someone
and not have them love you back.

When You Said GoodBye
When you said goodbye,
I found someone new.
I tried my hardest
to get myself over you.
 
I realized then, that I
can't run from a love so true.
I found myself dreaming again,
about the things that we used to do.
 
And when we got back together,
it felt so right, and I wasn't blue
It still feels that way
so wonderful and new
 
But when you say goodbye,
I'll find someone new
and I'll try my hardest
to get myself over you.
 
I Will
I will be a mother.
I will be a Good Mother.
I will be a good friend
I will make friends.
I will grow up.
I will grow old.
I will enjoy life
I will live my life the way I want to.
I will have fun.
I will be nice, but not too nice.
I will try to make you smile
I will make you smile.
I will.....
Be me!
 
Hard Questions
How could it be that I would give everything
            in my life for you, and I hardly know you?
How could it be that I would give you the moon,
           the stars, and everything I could, and I know nothing about you?
How could it be that I never believed in love at
           first site, until that night when I met you?
How could it be that I pray every night for you
           to love me, when in reality, I don't know what I'm praying for?
How could it be that I have found love, and I
           love you, but you are a stranger to me?

Strange
Sleeping
A deep, dark slumber. An escape from the norm.
Dreaming.
Seeing you in my sleep Being able to hold you. To see you. To be able to kiss your soft lips, and run your fngers through your hair.
Deep Sleep
Finding myself falling. Endlessly stumbling and falling.
Waking.
Going back to the norm. Going back into my reality. Feelings coming back
Waking. Waking. Waking...
Alone

I thought I liked you
I used to think I liked you.
But that was beore I got to know you.
I used to think I liked you
But that was before I knew better.
I used to think I liked you
But that was before you made me cry.
I used to think I liked you
But then I grew up a little
I used to think I liked you
But then I got to thinking, that just wouldn't do
I used to think I liked you
But now I know that I love you.
 
A cry for help
Deep, dark secrets
from your past
in your mind,
they forever last
Hiding inside you
no one knows, no one cares
you need to say it,
you need to share.
Your parents won't listen
you friends all have better things to do
They all keep frogeting
they don't realize you have feelings too
"you're always happy
you're never down"
they're never there
when you cry or frown
Feeling of depression
thinking of death
why worry about school?
why worry about health?
Where do you turn to?
Where do you go?
You want to tell someone.
Someone needs to know.
Wanting to quit
without regret
no one will notice
you're willing to bewt.
Life's no good, and it's not fair
your clothes don't fit
they don't like your hair
Is It worth it
to keep on living? or is it time to start forgiving?
You wish you could forgive all that ever hurt you
but where do you begin? where do you start?
you wish you knew
when your world fell apart.

3 little words
I almost said it once
Once? I almost said it twice.
Twice I thought it wasn't anything
anything that needed to be said at that time
time is precios
precious are few
few know what i mean to say
say it first so i don't have to
too many feelings cloud my mind
mind if I lay down a while?
While I sleep, tell me this
This is what I need to hear
Hear me when I say "I'm sorry
Sorry for being so damn stubborn"
Stubborn is what I'll always be
Be sure to tell me before I run
Run away so I don't get hurt
Hurt, I have been for so many years
Years I spent Chasing a dream
Dreaming of someone to love me true
True, it might be totally wrong
Wrong is how my life will feel
feel until my life's complete
compleate my worl with just three words
words i need to hear you say
Say them now. Say them soon
Soon I'll think that you don't care
Care about my heart and soul
sould is what you have to have
Have you figured out what i want
Wnat for you to say?
Say "I love you" and make me happy
happiest person Alive



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RE: poems (don't go to the other one! lol) - 7/17/2006 12:50:08 PM   
enigmabrat


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You know saying dont go to the other one I had to go check out why... but I didnt see a difference why the new thread

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RE: poems (don't go to the other one! lol) - 7/17/2006 1:41:23 PM   
MarksFantasyGirl


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it didn't have all of the little checky things at the top...

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--Fannie
AKA Savage's Fantasy
AKA Girl Dave
AKA Resident Flirt
AKA Sexy Hawt Woman

~*~Happily and proudly collared by my best friend~*~

Quitcher bitchen, and get out of the kitchen! ~Harry {3rdRock}

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RE: poems (don't go to the other one! lol) - 7/26/2006 5:50:56 AM   
duckssinthewind


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hey sugar!  you refreshed me so much today.  little checky thingies was a hoot, but better than that, you put yerself out there with the poetry, (presuming its your poetry, but if not then its sometimes hard to do  anyway).  i read it all, i have a love/hate thing going with poetry.  but Hard was peerless. 
 
for my money it didnt have catchy stuff or fancy construction.  but it made me stop breathing and start over.
 
i think the 44 % who f***ing BOTHERED TO RESPOND, and then chose none of the above were just mean.  cut the poll off right above that line, and disregard the tiny minds and ignoble spirits.
 
oh btw When You Said Goodbye makes a bang-up good song, lots of "oooo" end rhymes and a great f**k-off hook!~
 
thanks for doing this, i enjoyed it more than the flaming  threads that double as message boards and chats.
 
duckies
 
'nother thing:  i was with a Really Lovely Gentleman that i met on CM, and as He was dropping me back home He was griping about the CM profiles with poetry in them..... i had to laugh and say, You havent looked at mine lately, its loaded with poetry!
 
"to live as a warrior, dont indulge in crappy little thoughts"
 
and (cause i love this one)  "if can, can.  if no can, no can!"
 
(that one is tough to put on t shirts but they do)

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