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mp072004 -> RE: Proper profile (7/18/2006 12:25:29 PM)
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This is what I learned from your profile:
1) You like the idea of giving up control
2) You like the idea of providing service
3) You want a monogamous relationship, or, at least, you want only one partner for yourself.
4) You want a relationship with a woman.
The rest of the words don't actually communicate anything, and the first two points above are, as you can see, pretty vague. I learned that you were monogamous only because I read carefully and you referred at one point to "the one" who attracts you.
You can improve your profile by making it more specific, and writing sentences that express meaning clearly. "I am looking for a monogamous love relationship with a dominant woman. I would like to cede control of many areas of my life; I would like her to decide how my money is spent, and I would like her to determine what we do in our sex life. I am made happy by increasing the happiness of others, so it would be important for me to provide a variety of services in this relationship. I would want to be responsible for household chores to allow my lady additional leisure time." Now, this is not a complete profile, and it's not intended to reflect what YOU actually want. However, I imagine you will be more successful with concise and lucid sentences like those above. They have easily recognizable meanings, and they use examples to define fuzzy words like "control" and "service".
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Monica
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