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Polthus -> Her Claim (12/23/2015 10:54:05 AM)

Her Claim


Because she values my submission, obedience, adoration, and greed.
Because she craves the power, my trembling weakness in her arms.
Because she loves my strength everywhere else.

Because she lusts after my supplication, the ache of my need.
Because she expects it and forever
wants more.

Because the weight of her gaze is comfort.
Because the extent of her control is bliss.
Because the depths of her sadism
and my depravity have
yet to be explored.

Because she often says:

-You’ll do as you’re told
as you are my boy.
So beg for it.
Beg sweet
boy –

and means every word.

Because she wants to know each and every softened inch she possesses.
Because she is patient yet constantly probing for the most intimate
knowledge of every darkened corner
each twisted turn.

Because she wants me under her thumb: collared, plugged, and curled up.
Because she expects me eager to kneel at her feet.
Because she says that is where I belong.

Because she is right –
She lays claim
to me.




guardianschattel -> RE: Her Claim (1/11/2016 3:37:17 AM)

We have a poet in our midst!




Polthus -> RE: Her Claim (3/16/2016 8:35:16 PM)

Well I don't know that I'd lay claim to that title... I'm a novelist though, and someone much smarter than I once summed up the position of a long-form writer quite nicely!

"“I'm a failed poet. Maybe every novelist wants to write poetry first, finds he can't, and then tries the short story, which is the most demanding form after poetry. And, failing at that, only then does he take up novel writing."

So, yeah...failed poet works.

hope you enjoyed the piece though regardless :)




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