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DESERT BYTCH by [email protected] - 11/30/2004 7:31:14 PM

SirSTRYKER

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DESERT BYTCH by SIR STRYKER

Desert Bytch
Daddy's little cutie
Paints her toes
Too deep a shade red.
Satin pink
His favorite color panties
Make up, blush
He loves on your face.
Desert Bytch
Plays the game so cleaver
Many Doms
Have learned she is wise.
Beaten? Yes!
Although she'd not surrender.
She's twenty three,
going on ninenty nine.
Desert Bytch
Crossed paths with One much crueler.
Blow for blow
she had lost every round.
The story's told,
late at night and then in whispers,
When His bullwhip sounds
you can hear Him bark, “kneel down!”

SUBMITTED AND WRITTEN BY
SIR STRYKER 11/14/04

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RE: DESERT BYTCH by [email protected] - 11/30/2004 11:02:08 PM

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That was good - Ive enjoyed all your writings that ive read here - long may they continue.......

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RE: DESERT BYTCH by [email protected] - 12/1/2004 3:32:58 AM

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Thank you for sharing! it was great!

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RE: DESERT BYTCH by [email protected] - 12/1/2004 2:20:05 PM

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wow!! that was so beautiful
thank You for blessing this forum with that
-twisted

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RE: DESERT BYTCH by [email protected] - 12/5/2004 7:07:45 PM

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Sir, i'm not usually a big fan of poetry, but i must admit i did like this. As Ruby has said, i've enjoyed all your writings here. You have a colorful and vivid way of writing that "captures" me, losing myself in your words. And i'm looking forward to reading more of them. Thanks.

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