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DarkSteven -> RE: profile review? help? (6/20/2016 6:33:33 PM)
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1. As politely as possible, burn your profile to the ground and start again. The first paragraph says you want to be dressed in women's clothes and worship. Then you say you're ready to serve and throw in a few quotes.
Fella, you will do kinkscenes maybe 5%-10% of the time. The rest of the time, you'll be doing vanilla stuff. buying groceries, cooking, etc. The main purpose of your profile will be to make a woman think she's like to spend time with you and that you will NOT be some fantasist.
I recommend that you take a look at Rochsub's profile. http://www.collarspace.com/personals/v/922442/details.htm While it's not my style, note how he ticks off his accomplishments without seeming arrogant, has a picture of himself in a suit as his main photo, and his profile basically says "I'm real and not some fantasist. I know what I'm doing." He specifies that he wants to provide service, not kinkplay. Again, he gives the impression that he knows what he wants. His profile is written immaculately, and he sounds sophisticated and intelligent.
2. The message you send is actually easy. Let me pick the profile of one of my Friends, MargueriteV http://www.collarspace.com/personals/v/970868/details.htm I'll explain which things to pick in her profile to send a message about:
First paragraph - you could ask about Atlanta. Anything else is veering into territory where women have lotsa wankers asking kink questions. Don't be that guy.
Second paragraph - this is a gold mine of information about what subjects to lead with. If you have an interest or experience with any of them, strike up a conversation!
The rest of her profile simply lists what kinds of people she'd be compatible with. Read it, and make sure you fit the bill, but it's really not going to give you good conversational material.
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