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Constructive Criticism - 7/26/2006 6:36:51 AM

MojoRisin

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Hey all.... any constructive criticism on my updated profile?

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/26/2006 6:41:18 AM

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Either change the color scheme or the font size. The blue back ground makes it hard to read without highlighting.

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/26/2006 6:41:21 AM

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Well the first thing I can tell you is that your color choices have made it impossible to read without highlighting it.

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/26/2006 6:42:41 AM

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Lol....sorry...you were quicker than I

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/26/2006 6:43:35 AM

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quote:

ORIGINAL: MojoRisin

Hey all.... any constructive criticism on my updated profile?

Though i never saw the old one......i really am not much into the 'molding' part.

<winks>

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/26/2006 7:18:56 AM

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Trying to read it makes my eyes burn. I'd not even bother to be honest if I pulled it up and saw that.

I didn't read any of what you said because I really don't want a headache this morning. Sorry

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/26/2006 7:22:33 AM

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sorry mojo, its late here, I clicked on your profile and could barely read the words. Way too much effort was needed by me to highlight and darken the words in some way. Sorry

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/26/2006 8:16:54 AM

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Ya gotta use a lighter colored background. I am sure it's great - but people have to be able to read it if it's going to have a positive effect. I personally don't like the color aqua, but used it as my background because it made mine readable. Good luck, though!

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/27/2006 8:10:43 PM

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Hey, okay thanks for the advice....

Better...?

Any other comments?

MR

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/27/2006 8:49:23 PM

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I can't imagine why a maledom would hate female supremacy.

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/28/2006 12:42:01 AM

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you forgot the h in the word both.

otherwise I think it is just fine

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/28/2006 6:52:06 AM

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I can't imagine why a maledom would hate female supremacy.

Why? I don't find that any harder to grok than a maledom hating brussel sprouts.

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/28/2006 7:44:36 AM

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I think it's sweet.

'Believe' and 'fulfill' are both misspelled though, so you might consider making that correction.

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/29/2006 9:16:57 AM

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Got those... thanks!

Appreciate all the advice, means a lot. Really growing and learning since joining this page.

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RE: Constructive Criticism - 7/29/2006 9:55:36 AM