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LABYRINTH [A Fine Mix for me] - 12/13/2004 8:38:36 AM   
Barbara


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LABYRINTH [A Fine Mix for me]

Your warm taste still on my tongue
Sinking, gold tears whet my face
My mind sees the shame
as I grasp onto your textured soul

Tortuous in structure
We touch

You lavish upon me strokes of desire
its fire ripe, you allow me to glow
My body betrays me
as obeisant shades of beauty are realized

Intricately complex
We touch

..thanks for reading-
Barbara
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RE: LABYRINTH [A Fine Mix for me] - 12/13/2004 5:21:21 PM   
theroebabe


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Thansk for sharing that was great!



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People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: LABYRINTH [A Fine Mix for me] - 12/13/2004 5:25:12 PM   
alwayzron


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Again .... very creative and beautifully written ....

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