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Not what it seems - 12/13/2004 10:26:50 AM   
anitl3gal


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Status: offline 		Dont be worried, I wrote this as a bit of a joke for a class as well, It's mostly humor and not really based on anything but a class assignment, But it's fun to share anyway.


Bliss


Holding my breath for one last second
I feel the tingling feeling
Relief came as a shock
My mind bubbled with this sensation.

It was no longer dry
But I couldn’t stop now
The sensation was perfect
I held my breath again as it came.

After it was done
I relaxed a bit
Stared often into space
That was the best Pepsi I ever drank.




~aj
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RE: Not what it seems - 12/13/2004 2:36:22 PM   
t22tango


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Status: offline 		Hahaha, this just proves that there is more than one mind in the gutter along with me... LOL ~tango~

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RE: Not what it seems - 12/13/2004 5:32:09 PM   
theroebabe


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LOL That was great THANKS!


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