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ctrl-alt-delete - 4/18/2004 6:37:12 PM

angelpet

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ctrl-alt-delete

Girl stop the game
It is the net
Your life is not sitting in front of you
It is in your head

Girl stop the play
It is not real
He is not the one you seek
Your prince is not sitting in front of you
He is in your head

Girl stop the torture
It is all too painful
Craving what is not there
Your desires are not on that screen
They are eating at you

Girl stop the lie
It will ruin you
Lying to yourself
Your esteem is not in words
Words are your freedom

Girl stop the merry-go-round
It will spin you in circles
Keeping you down
Your dreams unfulfilled
Go walk on the wild-side
…of life

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RE: ctrl-alt-delete - 4/21/2004 9:49:40 AM

January

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angelpet,

I love your poem. Compassionate and expressive. And to my mind, truthful.

Cyber-playing (especially when an electronic order is carried out through RL self-bdsm) can be really creepy. But my saying, "it creeps me out" doesn't hold a candle to what you've written.

Thanks, and keep it up,

Jan

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RE: ctrl-alt-delete - 5/14/2013 9:41:05 AM

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LOVE IT

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