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ForgottenBreath -> The One (1/10/2005 7:49:11 PM)

I have watched You from afar, my eyes cautiously lingering upon Your hands.
What would they feel like? Are they soft or hard, careful or rough, easy or unyeilding?
Your mannerisms draw my attention, the motions of body language, Your easy stance.
Would You play my body and mind like a harp, charm me into Your bed, perhaps?
My eyes are drawn to Your devious smile and devilishly georgeous eyes, soul-searing.
Will those eyes penetrate my barriers and see the slut inside, drawing her out?
Your voice captures me, holds me in fascination, that deep and husky monotone.
Is that same voice the one that will become stern and strict, demanding my attention?
My gaze wanders Your body, pondering the sight of it bare, trapped between my thighs.
Could that handsome form make me beg and cry with passion, with wanton desire?
I watch You converse with another Dominant, catching words that even I don't know.
Will Your mind stimulate me, offer intelligence and show signs of deeper truths?
I have seen You here before, weilding a whip upon some lucky submissive.
Would Your heavy hand take me flying off into a world I crave yet fear?
My eyes still watch, still note, still absorb all of You as I silently ponder.
Could You be the one?





theroebabe -> RE: The One (1/11/2005 5:38:03 AM)


Sigh . . . what a wonderful way with words you have to show desire and wanting hope. thanks for sharing.





cynnacent1 -> RE: The One (1/11/2005 6:53:28 AM)

Well written, and very nicely expressed... good flow to the writing style also. Thanks for sharing. [;)]

¸,ø¤º°cynnacent°º¤ø,¸ (proudly owned by, and devoted to INSIDEYOURMIND)






velvetvixen -> RE: The One (1/11/2005 8:07:58 AM)

Does this writing come easily for you? How long have you been writing? I am always happy to see your posts, they are always so beautiful. Thank you.




liltxsubby -> RE: The One (1/11/2005 8:15:05 AM)

very beautiful




ForgottenBreath -> RE: The One (1/11/2005 8:33:17 AM)

Writing is something i've done since i was six. It's a vent for all my frustrations, my nightmares, my dreams, my fantasy. i often wonder how i can sit down and just start typing and when i get done it's so beautiful and inspiring that i feel i need to share it. Thank Y/you all for Y/your responses, hopefully, there will be many more poems to share in the future.




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