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Just a thought! - 1/12/2005 8:33:17 AM   
stormie


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It fights to live to breath to fly
To burst to freedom its wings to dry
Beauty and colors emblazoned see
Emerges strong butterflies are free.

Our love continues to live to breath
It grows with patience in joy and strength
Beauty and colors in your soul I see
Emerges strong and you are free.


I've waited and yearned to see these days
Sometimes discouraged but still I stayed
And though I ere thought love but feigned
I waited patiently it did not wane.

And now I see your joy begin
And now I see you free again
And when it seems complete to be
Our love will grow as butterflies free.


Just a Short Thought on Patience....We all hear How one Should have so much Patience ....
~smiles~
Slave_stormie


< Message edited by stormie -- 1/12/2005 9:00:53 AM >


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RE: Just a thought! - 1/12/2005 4:29:44 PM   
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thanks for sharing it was very insightful.



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People always ask me why I do these things . . .
It's because I can!

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RE: Just a thought! - 2/28/2005 10:52:24 AM   
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I enjoyed this piece immensely. I shall search for more of your writings. Thank you.

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