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My stupid poem - 1/12/2005 5:30:05 PM

autumn1985

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My tears fall like steady rain
My heart aches from the stain
I cry in the darkness alone
I sit here in this broken home

You tell me it will be ok
But from me you expect some kind of pay
I lay naked, shaking
And you climb on top of me taking

You quiet me by saying
You know this is what your craving
My inward cry’s and moans
Kept you strong and grown

You held me down and took from me
Just in a way to make me see
I didn’t have to have control
I could just let myself be stole

Now I sit here in this daze
You say I am new and its just a phase
I gave to you my virginity
And now all I have is my serenity

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RE: My stupid poem - 1/13/2005 1:32:19 PM

colonicegirl17

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i don't think your poem is stupid i think it's nice. but it seems like you feel you did something wrong? i'm a sub who's gone through a lot and i'm here to help. just leave me a message.

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RE: My stupid poem - 1/13/2005 7:10:08 PM

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I agree its not stupid some days are like that for me even now. Thank you for putting into words what i was feeling at times.

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RE: My stupid poem - 1/13/2005 7:19:20 PM

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It definetly tells us how you are feeling. Writeing is a great way of getting out your emotions. Infact it's how No Doubt got its best hits on it first CD such as Spider Webs and Don't Speak.

Best advice I can give you is to rip the collar of of the one who just wants you to stay there as a pice on the side, shove it up his ass (though he might like that), Tell him to fuck off, and move on with your life.

For sure masochist and subs may enjoy pain. But is keeping the heart broken give you pleasure as well?

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