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Focus50 -> RE: Critique my profile (5/17/2005 3:17:23 AM)
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Agree with most; the spelling and grammar errors are sloppy - esp in this age of spell-checks etc. Which, therefore, makes you look even more lazy than illiterate.
Not sure what *you* mean by D/s being a "one way street" but I certainly don't agree.... Subs/slaves belong to their Master with a reasonable expectation of having their own needs met, too, and if that doesn't happen, expect to be minus that sub/slave!
Domination comes from the mind - it doesn't matter how high off the floor your particular mind is; you've got it or you ain't! You're five-seven, it's only an issue because you're making it one - drop it and live with it; it's who you are!
And "the sub/slave" is still a human being, not a piece of machinery, so you might consider lightening up in that form of terminology; thus showing your own self to be human, too! I think that's the most important aspect lacking from your profile, the human quality.... Successful D/s relationships have more happening between the relevant parties than just D/s but your profile has the feel of someone whose been reading too much "kneel bitch" literature then tried to "soften" it then work it into a profile. You've picked up on important issues such as communication but your attempts to work them into legible sentences are way clumsy and mechanical.
Personally, I think you should start over and write more about who you really are rather than borrowing so much from cliche, macho, net-dom terminology. And finding a sub isn't like selecting options on a new car - everyone has gifts and flaws, which doubtless includes yourself, so stop being so selective as you may deter your ideal partner without ever meeting her....
Focus50.
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