iwillserveu
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To Mistress Dread
I am being punished by writing You free verse
That i will try to not make suck absolutely
M’Lady was merciful and did not make
Me write you a Sonnet although i’d try
Though i doubt that would be any good
Because i do not feel for you as i do M’Lady ‘though i’d try
And feel unbridled love or lust
To prove to M’Lady that i am trying to gain her trust
(Hey a poem that does not rhyme
is like trying to play Tennis without a net. )
Although i am not into poly families or third generation anything
i pray you try to allow your supplicant dispatch
His duties to his Mistress and take not
Offense where he tries to give You none
Lest he have to write a Sonnet for anyone else
(or at least try) She deems worthwhile
For Dread, in a different life maybe
i’d love you, or at least try
Because at core you are lovable
Even if you try to hide that core in a bitchy exterior
That is as cold as ice.
i hope you let your supplicant try
To melt that frigid, bitchy exterior
And try to experience the fire that surely lurks within
Your deepest being.
Although i do not do free verse well i try
To do more than write a run-on sentence
Whose right hand margin tries to be jagged
And full of meaning.
Because, MistressDread, if i do not try
To please You
Then this one should learn not to use forbidden words like “try”
When M’Lady is already slightly pissed
Well, i try to give you the gist
Mistress Dread
If i do not elicit a try at pity from your clenched fist
i will wish i was dead.
So please try pity me Mistress Dread
So i can write M’Lady a sonnet a’la Petrach
Which though i tried free verse i’d long for the structure instead
To keep me from going off on a lark.
(Note: Mistress Dread, i was being punished by writing a 30 line free verse poem (minimum this is I think 35 {hey, i’m tired}) to you that used try in every other line and calling myself your supplicant. The idea that I need your mercy was my conceit. Ditto the random rhyming. Sorry it sucks. You’re a poet. Imagine those constraints and write one for me. I doubt you’d do better. {Though i admit you could not do worse.})
I forgot to make this purple. This one asks if this is purple.
< Message edited by iwillserveu -- 4/24/2004 7:22:07 PM >
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