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CUTE GIFTS - 10/19/2006 6:41:30 AM

LordLouis

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My Permission

My Permission, Inc. is a new company putting out an exclusive line of products, ranging from clothes to music. Headquartered in North Jersey, just outside Manhattan, My Permission is situated in the midst of a unique mélange of people, art, and culture that is unmatched by any other locale. This Distinctiveness is reflected in the My Permission brand.

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RE: CUTE GIFTS - 10/19/2006 3:05:11 PM

DivaExMachina

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The products ARE cute, but that website needs a lot of polishing plus a run through a spell checker. The shop page is very disorganised and difficult to navigate. The home page really says very little about the company. The layout is not aesthetically pleasing. It really doesn't give me the kind of confidence that I need to have in an online store before I'll buy something from it.

Just some constructive criticism.

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RE: CUTE GIFTS - 10/19/2006 4:52:19 PM

DOMBifemTN

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Agreed Diva, this page looks like something a teenager threw together after school. Some of the products are cute and not too unreasonable prices. Page is also a little slow loading. I would put some more into the website if you want it to take off :)

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RE: CUTE GIFTS - 10/19/2006 4:59:08 PM

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I agree. My webslave put together a more professional site when he did the a rough draft of my site. As well, 'The Ladies' section is clearly meant to show the items being worn, but feels more like you're selling pinups, or advertizing escorts.

Just my two cents.

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RE: CUTE GIFTS - 10/19/2006 5:53:57 PM

MsKatHouston

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wow, invest in a web designer and please use a proofreader to write your copy. I don't care what you have, I would not buy from a site like that becasue it reeks amateur and unprofessional. I know that sounds harsh but if you want to run a successful business, you need to polish this a little before someone will have confidence that you will deliver what you promise. You have broken links, numerous misspelled words and poor grammat as well as a site that does not look good and is not easy to navigate. Good start though and with some polishing you might have something there. Good luck.

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RE: CUTE GIFTS - 10/20/2006 5:30:40 AM

sunnydays

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i agree with everyone above...

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