Collarspace Discussion Forums


Home  Login  Search 

Profile rewrite


View related threads: (in this forum | in all forums)

Logged in as: Guest
 
All Forums >> [Casual Banter] >> Off the Grid >> Profile rewrite Page: [1] 2   next >   >>
Login
Message << Older Topic   Newer Topic >>
Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 7:27:41 AM   
Aileen68


Posts: 6091
Joined: 8/2/2005
Status: offline 		So I decided that it's time for a revision to my profile.  I've been riding along on someone elses words for much too long now even though I do like the quote.
I'm old fashioned in that I still like to actually write on paper...which means I'm now surrounded by crumpled pieces scattered on the floor.  I've got writers block!!!!  How do you go about expressing yourself and why you're here?  Do you find it difficult to put what's in your mind into words?
Profile   Post #: 1
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 7:42:22 AM   
leatherzack


Posts: 59
Joined: 7/13/2005
Status: offline 		i find it very difficult to put in words why i am here and what i am looking for, mostly in english.

That is probably why i don't get a lot of replies !!!

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 2
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 7:55:38 AM   
Ava82


Posts: 55
Joined: 1/2/2006
Status: offline 		*fast reply*

I write down what I want, what I don't want, general basic stats about where I live, how old I am, what I do, experience, etc.  I tend to throw in that I am a playful sub, and if people aren't into that, they should pass me up.

(in reply to leatherzack)
Profile   Post #: 3
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 8:38:17 AM   
LaTigresse


Posts: 26123
Joined: 1/15/2006
Status: offline 		It is easy for me to write it, I believe the difficulty is others making any sense out of it.

Good luck Aileen, I have always gotten the feeling that there is a pretty amazing and interesting woman behind your words.


_____________________________

My twisted, self deprecating, sense of humour, finds alot to laugh about, in your lack of one!

Just because you are well educated, articulate, and can use big, fancy words, properly........does not mean you are right!

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 4
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 8:51:50 AM   
LuckyAlbatross


Posts: 19224
Joined: 10/25/2005
Status: offline
quote:

ORIGINAL: Aileen68
So I decided that it's time for a revision to my profile.  I've been riding along on someone elses words for much too long now even though I do like the quote.
I'm old fashioned in that I still like to actually write on paper...which means I'm now surrounded by crumpled pieces scattered on the floor.  I've got writers block!!!!  How do you go about expressing yourself and why you're here?  Do you find it difficult to put what's in your mind into words?

When it comes to a profile, no.  I've done it often enough with enough practice that it's pretty basic for me.  Feel free to steal my style as a template.

_____________________________

Find stable partners, not a stable of partners.

"Sometimes my whore logic gets all fuzzy"- Californication

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 5
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 9:21:19 AM   
Aileen68


Posts: 6091
Joined: 8/2/2005
Status: offline 		I'm awaiting approval...I think I rambled too much.  I've been doing that lately.
I think I did ok though....think I captured my personality.  We'll see.

(in reply to LuckyAlbatross)
Profile   Post #: 6
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 9:22:37 AM   
happypervert


Posts: 2203
Joined: 5/11/2004
From: Scranton, PA
Status: offline 		I just tried to describe myself on a basic vanilla level and follow with my favorite kinks. But yeah, it is like pulling teeth to come up with something where I don't say: "Gee . . . I sound like a real dork." Afer a few iterations, it finally got good enough where I could say: "Aha! Now I just sound like less of a dork than them other clowns."

_____________________________

"Get a bicycle. You will not regret it if you live." . . . Mark Twain

(in reply to LuckyAlbatross)
Profile   Post #: 7
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 9:25:29 AM   
toservez


Posts: 1733
Joined: 9/7/2006
From: All over now in Minnesota
Status: offline 		I try to focus on who I am in terms of core personality traits and what I like and want that is important and try not to water this stuff down by including other things in the same tone or length. I also think keeping it simple and straight forward is important. Do not ask people to have to interpret who and what from words meant to be clever or overly deep. I almost would compare it to writing a resume.




_____________________________

I am sorry I do not fit Webster's defintion of a slave but thankfully my Master is not Webster.

"Anything that contradicts experience and logic should be abandoned." - H.H. The 14th Dalai Lama

(in reply to LuckyAlbatross)
Profile   Post #: 8
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 9:44:37 AM   
popeye1250


Posts: 18104
Joined: 1/27/2006
From: New Hampshire
Status: offline
quote:

ORIGINAL: Aileen68

So I decided that it's time for a revision to my profile.  I've been riding along on someone elses words for much too long now even though I do like the quote.
I'm old fashioned in that I still like to actually write on paper...which means I'm now surrounded by crumpled pieces scattered on the floor.  I've got writers block!!!!  How do you go about expressing yourself and why you're here?  Do you find it difficult to put what's in your mind into words?

Aileen, go read mine, a lot of people told me I did a good job on it.
Just be honest, tell people about yourself, what you like, what you're looking for, what things turn you on/off, what activities you enjoy, toys, spankings, what type of bondage gear you enjoy etc.
And also the type of Dom you're looking for. Strict? 24/7? Easy going?  Sub willing to become a slave etc. Relocation?
Also I notice that only about 1/3 of people mention their job or career so that may be a good idea too.
Also any restrictions like unmentionables which can be a problem or somewhat limiting as to travel or location.
Also list any hobbies or outside activities which you may enjoy.
You know, all the nitty gritty stuff.

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 9
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 11:30:23 AM   
Aileen68


Posts: 6091
Joined: 8/2/2005
Status: offline 		Alrighty...it's up.  Let me know what you guys think.

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 10
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 11:59:51 AM   
LaTigresse


Posts: 26123
Joined: 1/15/2006
Status: offline 		Aileen, I like it very much.

It is so well written and conveys a very interesting and complex woman. The type of person I enjoy having as a friend.

_____________________________

My twisted, self deprecating, sense of humour, finds alot to laugh about, in your lack of one!

Just because you are well educated, articulate, and can use big, fancy words, properly........does not mean you are right!

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 11
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 12:09:20 PM   
LadyEllen


Posts: 10931
Joined: 6/30/2006
From: Stourport-England
Status: offline 		Aileen - I always thought your picture said a thousand words, but your new profile text says so much more.

Not looking for a relationship? Good luck with that one - I reckon they'll be mounting hunting parties to come find you!

E

_____________________________

In a test against the leading brand, 9 out of 10 participants couldnt tell the difference. Dumbasses.

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 12
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 12:20:12 PM   
slavejali


Posts: 2918
Status: offline 		I really like your profile, it's very well done  If  I didn't live over the other side of the world it would make me want to call you up and go for coffee.

_____________________________

Freedom in Bondage

Different Strokes for Different Folks

"I'll always have a *soft spot* for Sadists"

(in reply to LadyEllen)
Profile   Post #: 13
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 12:23:43 PM   
darchChylde


Posts: 5279
Joined: 9/28/2006
From: Warm Springs, GA but i live in San Francisco.
Status: offline 		Dearest Aileen,

Hey look still haven't used any of those bad puns and song references, i think i deserve a cookie.  Baah, scratch that, i deserve some peanut butter cups and a nice warm embrace.  I'll get my own candy, but I'm still looking for that embrace, i know i left it around here somewhere.

Sorry about the tangent, i'm in a wierd headspace.  It's neither good nor bad, but wierd all the same.  Whoa, i gotta stop that, i almost went down that same old road again.

Ok, i'm gonna start over, if this doesnm't come out right i'm gonna give up and mop the kitchen, then try again later.



Dearest Aileen,

I have read your new profile and I love it.  It's clear, succinct, and with a touch of humor.  If it weren't for Ma'am and the fact that I'm a sub too, and that I'm not looking for more than a friend here either; I'd be trying to get in on that hunting party that LadyEllenm mentioned.

I think we'd make quite wonderful friends, except for the karaoke thing; i'm not proud of it but i enjoy it all the same.  You are just twisted enough for me not to get bored with.

                                           Sincerely,

                                                      oren

post script: I know that this would have been better served in a private mail, but I've already sealed the envelope (my mom's favorite joke), and typed it out here so i'm gonna juse bite the bullet and hit [OK].

< Message edited by darchChylde -- 11/20/2006 12:34:58 PM >

_____________________________

I'm the man your mother warned you about...
if only to keep me to herself.

I'm a male dominant switch whose experienced as a poly sub to a dominant woman
.
Where the fuck do I post?

Proud Owner and Protector of chyldeschylde.

(in reply to LadyEllen)
Profile   Post #: 14
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 12:24:00 PM   
Rumtiger


Posts: 2634
Joined: 3/4/2006
From: Vegas
Status: offline 		A wife...huh?

_____________________________

Fuck the Pandas!
-Moi

Mmm, I love me some kickboxers, you know why? Cause ya'll cant take a punch!
- Quentin Tarantino.

If they cant take a joke, fuck em.
-Tucker Max

(in reply to slavejali)
Profile   Post #: 15
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 1:48:33 PM   
Aileen68


Posts: 6091
Joined: 8/2/2005
Status: offline 		Thanks all...I think I like it.  It's growing on me like a fungus.  :)

(in reply to Rumtiger)
Profile   Post #: 16
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 3:25:45 PM   
Level


Posts: 25145
Joined: 3/3/2006
Status: offline
quote:

ORIGINAL: Aileen68

I'm awaiting approval...I think I rambled too much.  I've been doing that lately.
I think I did ok though....think I captured my personality.  We'll see.



You did great, and I mean that.

_____________________________

Fake the heat and scratch the itch
Skinned up knees and salty lips
Let go it's harder holding on
One more trip and I'll be gone

~~ Stone Temple Pilots

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 17
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 3:38:26 PM   
slavemaia


Posts: 395
Joined: 8/26/2006
Status: offline
quote:

ORIGINAL: Aileen68

I'm awaiting approval...I think I rambled too much.  I've been doing that lately.
I think I did ok though....think I captured my personality.  We'll see.



Okay - i admit it, i don't often read the profiles of those on here unless they say something that strikes my curiousity about them. You did - hooray - you get the curiousity award. New Jersey - eh - my home town, so i can certainly "get" your mindset. And, you have one of my very fav quotes in your journal. i think you're doing just fabulous darling. You are clear and precise but in a very creative and intelligent way. You entertain while you inform. i think that's awesome.


_____________________________


She reaches up, not for the apple, but for what causes it to be there.
slave to love - - Chairman's maia

(in reply to Aileen68)
Profile   Post #: 18
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 4:36:38 PM   
Quivver


Posts: 1953
Joined: 11/27/2004
Status: offline 		FANTASTIC!!!!  You've captured you (or at least what I know of you) quite well. 


_____________________________

The problem with communication ... is the illusion that it has been accomplished. ~George Bernard Shaw

(in reply to slavemaia)
Profile   Post #: 19
RE: Profile rewrite - 11/20/2006 5:51:35 PM   
windchymes


Posts: 9410
Joined: 4/18/2005
Status: offline 		I think that any man that actually makes it past your photo will be smitten

_____________________________

You know it's going to be a GOOD blow job when she puts a Breathe Right strip on first.

Pick-up artists and garbage men should trade names.

(in reply to Quivver)
Profile   Post #: 20
Page:   [1] 2   next >   >>
All Forums >> [Casual Banter] >> Off the Grid >> Profile rewrite Page: [1] 2   next >   >>
Jump to:





New Messages No New Messages
Hot Topic w/ New Messages Hot Topic w/o New Messages
Locked w/ New Messages Locked w/o New Messages
 Post New Thread
 Reply to Message
 Post New Poll
 Submit Vote
 Delete My Own Post
 Delete My Own Thread
 Rate Posts




Collarchat.com © 2025
Terms of Service Privacy Policy Spam Policy

0.078