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my newest poem - 1/17/2007 5:45:34 PM   
michaelOfGeorgia


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this is my newest poem, i hope everyone likes it.
 
She comes out of the dark
Her smile warm and bright
on a journey we do embark
as She leads me into the light
 
Her smile is warm and kind
Her eyes twinkle with a spark
as She takes hold of my mind
and warmly melts my heart
 
we walk along the shore
She whispers in my ear
offering me so much more
then She pulls me near
 
"There is nothing to fear
I have so much to teach you
so follow me, my dear
first times are always new"
 
She leads me to a place
and She opens the door
windows adorned with lace
the same color She wore
 
She takes me to a room
candles placed all around
there was no sense of doom
only happiness was found
 
She places me on a bed
my limbs are gently bound
my gentle laces of red
i do not make a sound
 
She says i am safe
and She will do no harm
in Her, i have faith
and feel no alarm
 
"There are some things
that You should learn
when your heart sings
My love you shall earn"
 
She blows out each candle
and leaves me in the dark
"I hope You can handle
being alone when i depart"
 
"I shall not be far away
but this is your first test
all I have to say
is it's for the best"
 
as i lie bound and alone
i face my deepest fears
a chill fills my bones
and i burst out in tears
 
off to my right
i hear a stirring
She emerges into sight
then my heart does sing
 
"I am here little one
I have not abandoned you.
your test is done
and I love you, too."

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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 6:17:28 PM   
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very nice micheal

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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 6:25:32 PM   
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Michael, I tried to write a poem today but nothing came.
I guess you got all the inspiration allotted this side of the Mississippi for today.
Thank you for sharing your creation with us.


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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 7:28:49 PM   
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thank you both for your kind words

i get inspired when something affect me, and recently, something did.


< Message edited by michaelOfGeorgia -- 1/17/2007 7:53:32 PM >


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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 7:53:50 PM   
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more to follow as time passes

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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 8:17:24 PM   
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Wow, that's good! Wish I had such a talent. I look forward to reading more

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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 8:19:23 PM   
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will work on some more tomorrow, too tired tonight to think




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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 9:14:58 PM   
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Beautiful, michael.  Thanks for sharing that with us. 

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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 9:22:20 PM   
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you're welcome

i have my moments


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RE: my newest poem - 1/17/2007 11:37:49 PM   
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very nice indeed...

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RE: my newest poem - 1/18/2007 7:22:58 AM   
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thanks krissi




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RE: my newest poem - 1/18/2007 2:25:20 PM   
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The Collaring
 
As I kneel at Your feet
Your gentle touch I yearn
The ache is bittersweet
Makes my heart flame burn
 
The look in Your eyes
Brings me such joy
And makes me realize
That I am Your toy
 
You reach out Your hand
Brushing lightly against my cheek
That’s when I notice the silver band
Makes my body go weak
 
“This gift of love
makes you forever mine
before the angels above
and heaven devine
 
if you except this
symbol of My heart
it will bring me such bliss
for we shall never part”
 
I shiver and sigh
Eyes dancing with delight
And I begin to cry,
My soul shined so bright
 
“i accept this token
of the love we share
our bonds, unbroken
i share always wear
 
i pledge to You
my heart, unforsaken
my life, anew
will never be forsaken”
 
Toward You, i bow
Offering You everything
For I belong to You now
Which makes my heart sing
 
“With this collar I pledge
we’ll never be apart,
may no wedge
separate your heart from my heart”
 
my eyes fill with joyful tears
my journey now done
After all these years
My heart, You have won
 
“i except this collar, Ma’am
my pledge I give
For a sub is who I am
i give to You my life”
 
In place, You lock it
With great care
It was a perfect fit
i shall always wear
 
You lift me up high
In Your warm embrace
i knew, with a sigh
i have found my place.

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