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The Empty Road??? Part 6 - 3/2/2005 2:02:10 AM   
knees2you


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Thank You VelvetVixen,
For the new name to the story~
I introduce Mz. Scarlett Ravena.
I Smell Betrayal~


“The empty Road part 6.”

I am up in a tree crouched, and ready for action!
I can here the “ screams” of another human off
into the distance. My mind is focused and my hands are
ready for destruction of the Vampities.
I jump from the tree and race towards the noise.

By the time I get there, it is to late?
The Person that had been bitten was a beautiful
Woman. About 5’9 inches and 149 lbs. Long red hair
and hazel eyes. I reach in my side pack and pull out a vile,
as soon as I pour it down her throat I hear the “screeching”
of the Vampities as they are coming back for the Woman!
I lift her over my shoulders and I run like lightning to a safe place. As I lay Her down, I can smell the sweet smell of roses from a graveyard. I realize that they are getting closer!

I run to the nearest tree climb it,
and wait as they start to circle the Woman’s body.
I jump by Her side, crouching low! My circular blade is
swift ‘Swoosh” rising like a boxers uppercut!
“Yeaah” my voice yells. “Come get some,
taste my blade!” Blood Squirting only from the heart,
There bodies disintegrate. I then say. “You disgust me!”
I then spit out the taste of the Vampitites.
In a matter of seconds, there is not a Vampitie left, not a one!
I look to the moon and stars and as I lean my head back,
my body starts to jerk back and fourth.
I feel the my body getting stronger, knowing that I am closer to me Finding a way back to being Human?

I gently grab the Woman and rush Her back to the plantation.
We are not Humans, or Vampities, we have no know origin?
We are just here, to rid the World of the Vampities.
I lay the Woman in my lare on a king size mattress,
She is coming around. As she awakes, She reaches for my throat!
I move quickly and grab Her hands. I tell Her that it is ok,
And that She is safe.
I wait for the sweet smell of roses from a graveyard
to fill my nose? But there is none.
Good I say this is what I was hoping for.

I tell Her about what has happened to her, and that She will
be ok. She is finding it all hard to believe, and is full of questions.

Just then Mz. Ruby Red enters the room. I don’t feel her presence
Until She is upon my neck!
She says.” What would you have done if I were a Vampitie?”
{Hmmm} I say.” Mz. Red, I thought I was suppose to be able to sense when someone approaches?”
Whispering in my ear.
“Only a human and Vampitite, do I look like either?”
As my body trembles I say. “No Mz. Red, not at all!”
Her voice becoming deeper, darker now she says. “She is not a plaything for you. She was gone, why did you turn her back when you where suppose to have killed Her?
What attraction do you feel towards Her? Answer me!”
My breath is getting colder as I speak.
“I was going to, but I saw Her so lifeless, so frail.”
Mz. Ruby looks into Her eyes, and then places Her hands over them. “Sleep little one, sleep.”
Turning Her head towards me.
“You mister, are in deep trouble.” She raises Her fingers at me,
and I know to follow Her into Her dungeon.

She straps me to the wall, so as to have my butt out towards Her.
She plugs in the violet wand and runs it under my balls.
I scream very loud! “ahhhh” She digs it deeper!
I hold my screams , my breathing becomes louder.
She then grabs my cock and balls and squeezes deeper.
“Who do these belong to?” I pause a second. Again She says.
“Whom do these belong to?”
I squeak a slight voice. “Yours sweet Mistress!”
Grinning She says. “Good very good to hear. Now
you will have to name your playmate. Have you thought
about that yet?”
I regain my composer, and say.
“Yes I have Mistress, I have given Her a new name.
She will be called Scarlett Ravena!".
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RE: The Empty Road??? Part 6 - 3/2/2005 3:27:38 AM   
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OHHHHHHHHHHH very kewl! Thanks Knees for sharing!




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It's because I can!

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RE: The Empty Road??? Part 6 - 3/2/2005 12:26:40 PM   
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Thereobabe,
I hope to make this into a book~
Just not sure where to go or look
when it comes to finding a Publisher??

I've Always wanted to be a writer~

Thanks for the Support~

Sincerely, ant

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RE: The Empty Road??? Part 6 - 3/2/2005 6:50:44 PM   
theroebabe


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Well i have the same asperation, so good luck!



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It's because I can!

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RE: The Empty Road??? Part 6 - 3/4/2005 3:12:38 PM   
velvetvixen


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Yay! I really liked this chapter, and I am not biased one bit.

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