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Trachmyr -> Phantom Lover (3/7/2005 9:09:16 PM)


Into my empty home, sweet with the sound of regret unknown.
Living with these shadows, flitting just beyond my sight;
A smile, a face, just out of reach, just out of place;
Cloaked in their darkness, for they fright at the touch of light.

Never had I thought them real, never did they quite appeal,
I am not so broken to find comfort in these shades.
But now my phantom has a voice her own, and soulful tone;
And I can feel her ghostly hands reach out to me, then fade.

A gentle whisper in my ear, calming and inciting fear.
A softly given expression, a caress tempting embrace;
Her presence moving within my soul, assuring me I could be whole.
My dreams come alive and my heart does race.

Yet though I desire it such, I do not risk to dare to touch;
For my lovely phantom, who’s breath I now breathe,
May slip from my grasp, everything lost through this simple task;
And never again know the depths to which my passion may seethe.

~ M. Morgan, dedicated to that lovely voice within my head.




nella -> RE: Phantom Lover (3/8/2005 6:49:01 AM)

Nice. By the way are that picture you use from Mage the Ascension by White wolf or any of the artis that worked on those books? I think i regognises it.




nella -> RE: Phantom Lover (3/8/2005 6:49:03 AM)

Nice. By the way are that picture you use from Mage the Ascension by White wolf or any of the artis that worked on those books? I think i regognises it.




theroebabe -> RE: Phantom Lover (3/8/2005 7:09:56 AM)


Beautiful thank you for sharing!





MidnightBlue -> RE: Phantom Lover (3/8/2005 6:11:51 PM)

If only the person within the poem could see just how beautiful his soul truly is, as does the "Phantom", then maybe the fear would disapate




Trachmyr -> RE: Phantom Lover (3/8/2005 9:08:00 PM)

I thank you all for your kind words.

nella: You're in the right ballpark about the avatar, the original art was made by Ronin Studio who does a lot of white wolf's books. However it never appeared in WW, yet it certainly has enough of that same feel for you to identify it.

MidnightBlue: You are ever so kind... perhaps one day I will know my soul as you say; when I see it reflected through the eyes of my 'phantom'.




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