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maleforu -> JJ`S CAPTURE (3/19/2005 3:16:10 AM)

NOTE- this is my first publically posted story.... i`m above anyones negative judgement because of my spelling or structual errors... this will have mispelled words, punctuational mistakes, and read like one big run-on sentance for no other reason than two simple facts-

1-i`m lazy
2- i`m above those who attemt to build mountains from sand.....enjoy!


I HAD JUST TURNED 30 WHILE SIMOULTANEOUSY MOVING FROM LA TO MY HOMETOWN. I LEFT THE SECOND LARGEST CITY IN THE COUNTRY FOR THE DEPRESSING REALITY THAT ENGULFS ONE WHILE LIVING WITH HIS PARENTS IN A FARMING COMMUNTITY OF 3500. THE POSOTIVE THAT KEPT ME FROM TYING MYSELF TO A FLAGPOLE DURING A LIGHTNING STORM KEPT ME GOING. I GAVE UP THE ARTISTIC DREAM AND JOINED THE PILL POPPING WORKING CLASS.

THESE CHANGES BROUGHT THE REALIZATION OF WHAT I NEEDED FOR HAPPINESS. I HAD FANTASIZED SINCE THE AGE OF 16 ABOUT THE S&M LIFESTYLE. I WAS TOO SHY TO EXPRESS MY NEEDS TO ANYONE. WHILE IN LA I PAID TWO DIFFERENT MISTRESSES WHILE HIGH AND UNAFRAID. ONE FUCKED ME HARD AND THAN INVITED HER GIRLFRIEND AT MY BLESSING TO ENJOY MY ASS. THIS WAS A GREAT TIME BUT THE HOUR I PAID FOR ENDED QUICK. THE SECOND TIME WAS NIRVANA... I WAS HANDCUFFED, HOODED, ANAL BEEDS, NIPPLE CLAMPS, LIGHTLY SHOCKED, AND THAN SPANKED HARD BY HER BOYFRIEND IN EXCHANGE FOR 60 SECONDS OF SUCKING HER PERFECT BREASTS. SORRY... I`LL MOVE ON...
THE REALIZATION OF ATTEMPTING TO SEEK HAPPINESS WITH DESIRES OF WHAT GOD FEARING SMALL TOWN PEOPLE LABEL PERVERSION LED ME ONLINE. I ATTEMPTED TO HANG IN THE CHATROOMS BUT BECAME DISCOURAGED QUICKLY. IS POSTING WHAT YOU WANT TROLLING?

I DECIDED TO CONTACT PEOPLES PROFILES. I WAS SMITTEN WITH LUST THE FIRST TIME I LOOKED AT JJ`S PHOTO. IT WAS ONLY HER FACE BUT THE SMILE LIT UP MY CEREBRALS. THE PHOTOS SHE POSTED IN COMBONATION WITH HER PROFILE HAD MY DAYDREAMS DISTURBING MY WORK OUTPUT. WE STARTED SENDING E-MAILS BACK AND FORTH WHICH CONTAINED ONLY SMALL TALK. I HAD PROMISED HER THIS STORY ABOUT HER DESIRE TO HAVE HER HEAD SHAVED BY A GROUP. HER LONG CURLY CURLY HAIR WAS HOT BUT HER EXPLRATIVE WILLINGNESS TO DRASTICALLY CHANGE WAS MORE THAN I COULD TAKE.
I NEVER POSTED THE STORY. I HAD COME ACROSS PICS OF WHAT LOOKED LIKE HER ON ANOTHER SITE BEING SHAVED. I WAS JEALOUS AND EXTREMELY ENVIOUS OF THOSE WHO PARTICIPATED. I HAD NEVER PLANNED SOMETHING WITH REVENGE IN MIND. I WAS HESITANT, I ASKED MYSELF DAILY IF THIS WAS NORMAL, BUT DECIDED TO PROCEED BASED ON JJ`S PROFILE. HER E-MAILS AND DESCRIBED LIKES WERE ALL THE JUSTIFICATION I NEEDED.

AFTER 6 MONTHS OF COMPUTER GETTING TO KNOW YOU JJ AND I MADE PLANS TO MEET. I WAS COMING TO HER CITY FOR ONE REASON.... I WAS BENT ON SHOCKING HER. HOPING TO IMPRESS HER ENOUGH FOR HER APPROVAL. WE WERE TO MEET AT 6PM AT A DIVE BAR ACROSS FROM MY HOTEL. THIS WAS BETTER THAN PLANNED.

I ARRIVED AT THE BAR AT 615. LATE BECAUSE I HAD NO CHOICE BUT TO JACK-OFF. MY DICK HAD BEEN HARD SINCE TWO. I NOTICED TWO GIRLS IN A BOOTH AT THE BACK OF THE DIMLY LIT BAR. I ORDERED A JACK AND COKE WITH 3 SLUTTY RED HEDS.(JJ HAD RED HAIR) JJ HADN`T MENTIONED HER BRINGING A FRIEND BUT THIS DIDN`T SURPRISE ME. I SMOOTHLY SAUNTERED ACROSS THE BAR WHILE TAKING NOTICE OF THE FACT THAT WE WERE SECLUDED AND OUT OF ANYONES SITE.

I SET THE DRINKS DOWN AS BOTH GIRLS SMILED WHILE EXCHANGING GLANCES. I RECOGNIZED JJ AND INTRODUCED MYSELF WHILE SUPRESSING THE ANGER I FELT WHEN SEEING HER PAPERBOY CAP. " HI I`M JASON...JJ?" JJ SLID OVER AND SAID YES WHILE INVITING ME TO SIT DOWN. SHE INTRODUCED HER FRIEND RACHEL AS WE ALL GRABBED THE SHOTS IN HOPES OF NUMBING THE AWKWARDNESS OF MEETING SOMEONE NEW.

I WAS TORN BETWEEN HAPPY AND UNHAPPY AT THE SITE OF RACHEL. SHE WAS HOT BUT POSSIBILLY THE OBSTRUCTION THAT WOULD FOIL MY PLAN. THE PACKAGE SHE PRESNTED SOON WON ME OVER. SHE LOOKED TO BE ABOUT 5`8, 130, BIG BROWN EYES, BREASTS A LITTLE BIGGER BUT JUST AS FIRM AS MELONS, AND OUTGOING WITH INTENTIONS TO PARTY. WE HAD SEVERAL SHOTS AND DRINKS WHILE GETTING COMFORTABLE WITH THE REALIZTION OF A NIGHT OF FUN. RACHEL STOOD UP AS MY PLANS CHANGED WHILE CAUSING MY COCK TO STIFFEN. I WAS NERVOUS WITH ANXIETY BUT ID WENT TO FAR TO CHICKEN OUT NOW.

MY CHANCE WAS NOW WHY WE WERE ALONE. I WHISPERED SEDUCTIVELY INTO JJ EAR HOW BADLY MY DESIRE TO SPANK HER ASS IN THE MENS ROOM WAS. SHE SMILED." THAT WOULD BE HOT. I LOVE GETTING SPANKED" SHE SKEPTICALLY QUESTIONED OUR PRIVACY." IS RACHEL INTO THIS TOO?" I ASKED. " OH YEAH... SHE`S A SWITCH WHO DOMS WOMEN BUT SUBS WITH MEN." THESE WERE THE WOORDS THAT GAVE ME NO FEAR. I FIRMLY LOOKED JJ IN THE EYES..." THE ONLY PEOPLE HERE ARE THE TWO GUYS AT THE BAR... I`LL ASK RACHEL TO WARN US IF ANY LADIES HEAD TOWARDS THE BATHROOM....IF YOU LIKE PLEASE UPON RACHELS RETURN GO INTO THE STALL. BEND OVER TEH TOILET..PLACE YOUR HANDS ON THE BACK AND STICK YOUR ASS UP".

RACHEL SAT DOWN AND SMILED. JJ ASKED ME TO CHECK OUT THE BAR AGAIN. I GOT 3 MORE SHOTS AND RETURNED TO SEE THE GIRLS SITTING TOGETHER. THEY BOTH STOPPED GIGGLING AS THEY CHANGED TO SERIOUS.

" WHAT'D I MISS"
RACHEL- " JJ JUST TOLD ME HOW HOT YOU MADE HER. SHE IS AFRAID OF SAYING NO THOUGH"
ME-" I WOULDN`T BE OFFENDED IF SHE DID....WHY? I ONLY PLAY WITH MUTUAL CONSENT."
JJ-" RACHEL SUGGESTD SOMETHING DIFFERENT"
RACH"ISN`T YOUR ROOM CLOSE?"
ME" RIGHT ACRSS THE STREEST"
RACH"WE BOTH ARE INTO HAVING FUN TONIGHT. THIS BENG OUR 3RD HOUR OF KNOWING YOU AND IN NOT WANTING THE OTHER TO FEEL LEFT OUT...... WE STAY AND PLAY TOGETHER.

I HID THE RUSH OF JOY THAT CAME WITH NOW KNOWING MY PLAN WAS GOING THROUGH. " WE HAVE DINNER RESERVATIONS AT 8, WE`LL STOP AT MY ROOM, I`LL CALL FROM THE LOBBY AND CHANGE THE RES FROM 2 TO 3. WHILE I CALL YOU 2 ARE TO GO UP TO THE ROOM, IF YOUR UNSURE THIS IS YOUR OUT. WHEN I ENTER YOU SHOULD BOTH HAVE YOUR FACES ON THE BED, BENT OVER WITH YOUR ASSES UP..."

AS WE WALKED TO THE HOTEL I GOT MY FIRST GOOD LOOK AT RACHEL. SHE WAS 5`8 WITH LONG LESGS, HER FUCK ME BOOTS AND SHORT SKIRT WERE HOT. THE GIRLS TOOK MY KEY AS I WENT TO THE HOUSE PHONE. THE ONLY RESRVETION WE HAD WAS WITH MISTRESS HALLE. MIS HALLE WAS THE MOST STRIKING BLACK WOMEN I HAD EVER SEEN, AND SHE WAS VERRY INTO MY PLAN. THE THREE HUNG SLAVES SHE HAD WERE PERFECT.

SORRY .... I HAVEN`T GOTTEN TO THE GOOD STUFF YET.... I MUST CONTINUE LATER.... I HOPE THIS INTRO WASN`T TOO BORING.





theroebabe -> RE: JJ`S CAPTURE (3/19/2005 7:59:35 AM)


Oh very nice beginning! more please!





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