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baphomeh -> Thin Veil (3/25/2005 6:30:01 PM)

I stand in the dark feeling the soft pressure of the touch of your eyes as they caress these words lightly and unsure...

in that quiet darkness sparks of anger and frustration fly from me... with each brief light i see glimpses of u thru the thin veil of space that seperates us..

The sense that u are near gives birth to the countless angels and devils that fly within my inner divinity...

i pause and breathe deep the scent of ur searching spirit.. I yell with the force of a thousand hurricanes... my fists pound against the veil with the force of the thousand generations before me denied the purity of the instant moment of two halves forming a whole...

the veil shudders for only an instant as my fury ripples across its folds.. I push hard... still trying to will my form thru the wall of imagination between us, so that u may feel my realness against ur body...

the struggle to free myself was as nothing compared to the imprisonment i feel now for what is it to know the purity of my passion without being able to let it fly free from this cage of flesh into your waiting embrace?

I call out to those who hear me and have tread this path to lend me their compassion as I walk in steps they may have already planted within the history of the world... i call out to those who stand next to me along this thin veil which seperates them from the doorway of another heart and soul and body to love..

What are war and racism and death and disaster to such as I for whom the world is only the earth beneath the path I take to reach u?

I dare not say what I would do if that veil was no longer... i wait for ur own hands to reach thru it to feel my smooth lean muscles... to see almond skin and hazel eyes gazing deep into u..

My hand twists and clenches at the thought of holding u tightly letting the sensation of the curves of your body surround me as I penetrate your existence...

I alternate between soft touches that flow from my heart to find u to the harsh slings and arrows of my furious passion as they seek to attack your defenses... Piercing thru the veil between us...




theroebabe -> RE: Thin Veil (3/26/2005 6:01:42 AM)


Beautiful thank you for sharing!





SirSTRYKER -> RE: Thin Veil (3/28/2005 7:26:19 PM)

You have a passion yet to be unleashed Friend. A way with words not many can express so vividly. In short, you're good!




DRoseThorns -> RE: Thin Veil (4/2/2005 1:55:10 PM)

Excellent !!!




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