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something i wrote and wanted to share. - 3/10/2007 6:34:51 PM

FurysEmbers

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A wise man said that something of value is hard to do. I am a slave. Still the road to being your slave or the slave of any other will be hard. I will have to change some things. I will have to go beyond my fear and my standards. To take another’s standards after 20+ years of my own is hard in and of itself. Being a slave I can’t do this alone. I need the strong hand of my Master to be my roots when it feels like I have thrown all mine away. Master would be my home, my strength, my heart, my roots, and my needs. Master would be my God, my world.

I can truthfully see why some would never take that final step. Why they would turn away right at the end. Its funny that giving myself to my Master is like that of giving myself to the Lord. I am born again, not in my image of my world, but as my Master would have my world. I can see why those who have been the slave of one Master for so long to lose him would find themselves in a world without meaning. I think that the dance between a Master and his slave should be a long one. It should be a dance of love and respect.

Silent tears

Would the night cover me
Cover my tears of farewell to everything
As I begin anew
The passion I have carried so long
Finally bearing fruit
Yet I wish to be covered
No one would understand that I had given my soul to you
That I am no more the daughter of my parents
But the slave of my Master
They have their sun
Still they judge mine
Such a pretty flower they say
Yet they throw me to wilt away
You didn’t
You saw me when no one was looking
Saw my agony at a sun
With which I could not bloom
Though my road to growth is marred with pain
You took me
You showed me that I was beautiful
Just as I was
Even if I craved the a sun of a different sort
Its said and done with now
The war
Between the world and my soul
So I sit in night
Away from your shining God-kissed light
And I cry
Not with sadness of leaving
But the joy of being found

i wanted to post this and see what others think of my thoughts and my poem. i hope the night finds you all well.

Namaste
Kimberly

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Omnia mutantur, nihil interit. (Everything changes but nothing is truly lost.)

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RE: something i wrote and wanted to share. - 3/10/2007 7:14:15 PM

WhiplashSmile

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Kimberly, you have no idea what this means for me to read these words coming from another human soul. Have you ever found yourself questioning where the other human being came from, in the book and Geneis. Pondering who was the Father and creator that molded Adam and Eve. The beginning of a specific blood line of people, over other blood lines of people. Gasp! I'm just saying for one to explore such deep thoughts and the WHAT if behind some of the madness.

I am by no means am attacking anybody's faith or belief, or trying to claim this as fact. Just a thing that I myself found to be an alarming deep personal thought. It was distrubing, and I am certain perhaps distrubing for others. However, after reading the beautiful words you wrote. It was your thoughts that touched upon this thought inside of me.

Again, I by no means claim to be right or wrong. This is just a person thought I've had from time to time, when reflecting upon certain aspects and matters of my own personal life.

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