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Reduced to This..... - 3/28/2007 1:42:37 PM

daejannaO

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i have recently written this poem after feeling heartache
within my soul. i have also updated my profile. y/You will
see this poem there too. writing this poem has helped me
to release these thoughts and to keep reaching out to others.
daejanna
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Reduced to This written 3/27/07

reaching out,
i await for my Master.
mind is intense
no control
so i wait and wait
for my Master to come.
no reply.
what am i?
i am reduced to this.

knees on the floor
hands over my eyes
head bowed down
i am reduced to this
and i ask myself why?

tears unbridled
i am reaching out
heart in my hand
and it breaks
and i ask
is this what it takes?

i am reduced to this
i am reduced to this nothingness
i am reduced to You.

i wait for control
i wait and wait
for my Master to come
to come and take me home
i release myself
so i can be His..........
i wait for this.

no reply
what am i?

i am reduced to this.

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RE: Reduced to This..... - 3/28/2007 5:10:43 PM

bardtothebone

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A true submissive possesses an innate femininity that caresses all who meet her like a Spring breeze; Once joined to her rightful Dom, she loves them with the fathomless affection of which only women blessed with her gentle gift are capable. Anyone so blessed as to number among these rare and delicate beings can never be diminished, except by those unworthy of her love.

Believe in yourself, be prudent in your search and the one who is your destiny will emerge from the shadows and transform your world.

The Bard.

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RE: Reduced to This..... - 3/28/2007 5:12:35 PM

czardas

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I don't really know where your emotions come from, but I can relate to them. Thank you for sharing with me in this way. I am OK with music but I often struggle with words. I like your poem in the sense that, it relates to my own experience. I wish you the happiest future, and that you may meet a caring and understanding master.

Czardas.

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RE: Reduced to This..... - 3/29/2007 9:22:58 AM

daejannaO

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i want to thank y/You both so, so much. it is how i was feeling at the time.
hugs bardtothebone. hugs czardas.
that poem was such a release to me. i have since severed my ties from my former
Master. i have written to Him of this. i am no longer His slave. i am free to move on. this poem is no longer on my personal page. i have again, updated my personal page, more information to learn of.
i will stop by both of y/Your profiles to learn more of y/You too.
be well.
dae

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RE: Reduced to This..... - 3/30/2007 10:25:21 AM

daejannaO

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hello everyone.
this poem is no longer within my profile.
if Y/you still wish to read it, it will be here for a/All to see.
thank You.
dae

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