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chainedpoet -> Needs a title (5/24/2004 6:12:31 AM)

The sighing has stopped
the whip it rests
The stripes appear on back and breasts
Moving slowly and with great care
ask for another?do we dare?
To feel the sting!
to expel a gasp!
the pleasure it brings!
please wear a mask!
The struggle fought
we play with fear
Never a thought
a pleasant tear.




subbyone -> RE: Needs a title (5/24/2004 5:27:03 PM)

I read untitled and thought ScorpioMoon would like you to add this. [:)]




LordJereth -> RE: Needs a title (5/24/2004 5:30:25 PM)

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Needs a title

How about "The sighing"?

Good piece of writting you have here. Enjoyed much, thanks for sharing.

LJ




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