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fangs - 5/3/2005 10:25:06 PM   
boredvoyer69


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my fangs are bloody
my bodie aches
the blood dripps
from my face
i want so much more
what can i do
i feel traped
by what i now do
you dont see me
in shadows i hide
will i be free
i dont want to hide
so my fangs are stained
with the blood of strangers
and i hunt who i want
and drain the blood evermore
with bloody fangs
i do hunt
and thurst for
the bloody door


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I bite, I lick, I claw, I stick, I am wolf, and I am out for blood!
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RE: fangs - 5/4/2005 11:08:13 AM   
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Very vivid images thanks for sharing!



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RE: fangs - 5/4/2005 1:32:53 PM   
Kindred2Evil


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Loved the poem

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RE: fangs - 5/14/2005 8:54:43 AM   
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good piece and so well written...thanks

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