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The Part Thast Was You. - 5/6/2005 1:00:26 PM   
ErtcWickdWanda


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][ Your laying there, in the dark. You think that I can't see you, but soon you will find that you are wrong. You had always been so willing, and in need of doing more than, and being better than all the others. You have spent the better half of your tireless life under my foot, and I have never givin you any type of endearment, except dear. Unlike the one that was you befor, and it was as it should be, No complaints. No feelings of on gratefull mistress. Lost are you while I am gone away from you. Your eyes, they swell with tears of longing. Yes that is a far worse pain than you could ever imagine. After hours of painful longing, you'd be begging to be put high upon the rack, just so that you could better understand these tears that flow from you like rain water. In your poor head, you see no form, or substancial shape. It has all melded into a form that is unlike anything ever, as the rope is wraped tightly around your wrists, you breath easier. Soon you will be back. Back in to your crazy head. Free to fantasize of a life that never was, is, or will ever be.. This place, in your head, is the only place you know well, and it is here and only here that you are at home with your self, It is the only one place that you are familiar with. Now, or Ever will be.]




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RE: The Patr of You - 5/9/2005 5:39:33 AM   
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Thank you for sharing! Gives a different view to a slave mindset!



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RE: The Patr of You - 5/14/2005 8:24:06 AM   
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a smile slowly crossed My face as I read this and I think, "As it should be!" Thanks much for this piece.

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RE: The Patr of You - 5/24/2005 6:31:11 PM   
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Thank You for that. It is a real story written in prose.I am glad that you enjoyed it. It is close to my heart. This work that is...

M.Wanda

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