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Asherdelampyr -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 8:43:06 PM)

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ORIGINAL: NorthernGent

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ORIGINAL: Asherdelampyr

It's around ten pm, you are driving home from work. As you drive by a deserted stretch of road your car just stops, without any warning. You try to restart it, but to no avail. As you get out to open the hood you see a handsome man, his long hair flowing past his shoulders. He stops and asks you if something is wrong, you reply that your car died, and you arent sure why, to which he says "Even death is not the end."..........



You reply....

Look, I need a hand with my fuckin' car, not an audience with a self promoting undertaker.

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ORIGINAL: Asherdelampyr

Please share your thoughts, as well as any tales of your own.



A man walks into a pub with a duck under his arm and a talking frog..............
That almost made me spit out screwdriver....

And please other people post stories too.




IilaStarfire -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 8:47:25 PM)

       Walking down the path in the park, the sky that luscious color that comes just after the sun’s edge has completely fallen below the horizon, the trees tall and fading fast into midnight-tinted hues, a cool breeze against your back feels delicious after the heat of the day.
      You pause for a moment, staring up at the sky, the stars slowly beginning to twinkle and shine vibrantly against the velvet darkness. A sigh escapes your lips. It had been a peaceful day, and you had no set plans for this night. It looked to be a most beautiful of nights.
     For a moment, you close your eyes, letting yourself be lost in the simple beauty of the night. All the rest of the world melts away for you until it is comprised of nothing beyond the caress of a breeze on your skin, tender and cool, and the sound of crickets chirping. A faint change in the patterns of the air causes you to come back to yourself, eyes opening, shimmering with the light of the stars above.
       You are no longer alone here.
      “Good evening,” a voice says from beside you, rich, husky, sending a shiver down your spine.
       You slowly turn, eyes catching on to the figure. This is no one you recognize, yet so familiar the form, the voice, as if out of a dream or distant memory.
      “Do I know you? You seem familiar to me, yet I cannot place you,” you say, voice soft, hiding the trembling.
      “I am, and I am not,” a throaty laugh punctuates the simple statement, as the figure draws nearer.
      You back away, heartbeat increasing slightly, yet surprisingly not out of fear. The figure draws nearer, then proffers a hand. “Shall we sit on one of the benches? I am certain you would rather sit, then fall…”
     Without any reluctance you take the hand, following, as you are led to one of the park’s many benches, hidden from prying eyes. Together you sit, facing each other.
     “I do know you… I thought it was a dream,” you say, fingers gently tracing the inside of your throat, near the collarbone.
       A smile plays across the lips of the other, teeth shining in the light of the stars. “The dreaming was to make certain you would not fear me, when I came to you…”
      Shivers runs down your spine, your eyes locked on those teeth, refusing to look anywhere else. Fingers gently caress your cheek, as gently as the breeze had, forcing you to look up, into the eyes across from you.
     Such eyes, you think before you tilt your head to the side, a silent offering.
     Softly, you hear the sound of pleased chuckling. “I had not imagined you so ready for my kiss, but you offer so sincerely and innocently what I need, how can I deny your offer?”
    You close your eyes, the fingers slowly moving to cup the back of your head, lips pressing against your skin. Shivering, teeth pressed against your skin, softly, yet not piercing, as if making certain of your desire to give this gift. Your fingers reach up to grasp the wrist behind your head.
    “Please,” you whisper.
     A sharp pain as the teeth pierce your skin, then shivers of ecstasy as you feel the sweet pull of life being drained from you. Each pull sends waves of pleasure shooting through your body. The teeth are pulled away, lips and tongue making short work of any blood that escapes.
    You heave a happy sigh, looking at the other dreamily. A smile lingers on the lips, which then meet yours softly, allowing you to taste your surrender. The hand pulls away slowly, caressing your cheek. You catch the hand, pressing it against your cheek adoringly.
    “Let us get you someplace safe to sleep, you have given much tonight.”



A note:
I left the characters unformed on purpose, that the reader may insert the dream vampire of their choice for their own greater enjoyment. Let me know what you think... Please?

*edited so it would show paragraphs. grrrr*




Asherdelampyr -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 8:55:42 PM)

Very nice :)




IilaStarfire -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 8:58:15 PM)

Thanks, I just wrote it tonight....




MissMagnolia -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 9:01:52 PM)

Beautiful. Thank you Iila[:)]




BossyShoeBitch -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 9:02:20 PM)

Iila- I never knew you were so good!

Darch- Now that was certainly worth the wait!  (How many months ago did we talk about you sending me a little story?  LOL)

Asher- eagerly awaiting the next installment!




IilaStarfire -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 9:09:31 PM)

Thank you for the compliments Miss M, and BSB! ^_^




Asherdelampyr -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 9:13:38 PM)

Well, c'mon I know more people have stuff, share it 




sexyred1 -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 9:14:20 PM)

You gotta love those hot vampires....I have done so since first reading my first vampire story as a young girl..always found them highly erotic...even before I knew what eroticism, and D/s, meant. But I knew something was up.[;)]




domiguy -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 9:32:01 PM)

The rustle of leaves were the only thing that could be heard over the light howl of the Fall wind....It was a beautiful October evening the air was cold and crisp.....She sat alone on a bench overlooking the park below. She wondered if she would see any UFO's or unicorns, for the conditions were perfect.

He came up behind her, silently. Without saying a word he cupped his right hand around her neck softly and firmly drawing her head back towards him. In a fluid graceful movement he lowered himself down upon her and bit deeply into the left side of her neck. The sensation was overwhelming. She could feel her nipples tighten beneath her shirt. She wanted to scream with delight...She lightly whispered, "are you the one?"

"Of course not." He responded, "I am not the one for you. In fact there is probably no one alive who could actually meet up to your fantasies or dreams"....He continued to speak as he wiped the last remnants of blood off of his chin and mouth..."you see you are kind of fucked up....You look for all sorts of crazy imaginary shit....It doesn't exist. It never has and it never will. Just cause I bit your neck doesn't make me a vampire, it actually makes me a fucking psycho!.. Before I got into the psycho business I used to be a dentist....It was just way to depressing. So here I am.... Did you know that people who have bleeding gums are twice as prone to experience a heart attack? Anyways you seem nice enough....Look there's a unicorn!" She quickly turned her head to see....When she looked behind her he had all but vanished, only leaving behind a faint scent of Old Spice Body Wash.

She walked back home alone and along the way she couldn't stop herself from sobbing....The following week she got engaged to an accountant.





SimplyMichael -> RE: Erotic tales (1/17/2008 9:46:09 PM)

You suddenly realize you have been reading all afternoon.  The couch has been so comfy and the book so engaging that you lost all track of time.  Snuggling back under your blanket, you turn your attention back to the book but a thought occurs to you "what drew me out of the book?"  You realize it is cold, colder than it should be.  You glance out through the big picture window and as you do you see the last scarlet of the dying sunset fade away to darkness. 

Wondering whether it is worth leaving the safe confines of your warm little nest on the couch to get another blanket, you suddenly feel a chill spread over your body.  Not a normal chill, this one saps the warmth from inside you.  Instantly an ancient and primal awareness seizes your attention and instinctly you realize "Be still, you are being hunted!"

To be continued (actually, couldn't figure out where to go from here...







camille65 -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 3:03:32 AM)

Edited to add that this is totally unedited, unproofed. Games People Play

The sound of birds woke me. Long moments passed before I realized I was immobilized and blindfolded. I was laying on my back on something bed soft but the sound of the birds and the breeze playing over my naked body said I could be outdoors. I fought down a momentary panic as it dawned on me what was going on.
Alan loved to play games. Last week he had me dress in a black dress that barely covered my ass. Naturally I wasn't permitted panties or bra. Every time I moved my dress would shift and mens eyes would follow me. Alan loves it when other men look at me, knowing he is the only one that can have me. The only one who can fuck me and use me to his hearts content. That outing resulted in five hours of rough and wet fucking. Hard good sex that leaves the body limp and almost raw feeling.
I took a deep breath and shift, trying to determine the fabric I was laying on. It was soft but it wasn't a bed, I could feel where it dipped in a pattern and by arching my back I guessed I was on plastic or vinyl. I couldn't do anything but wait now. The breeze died down and slowly the warmth of the sun crept up my body. Bathing first my feet then my legs in a delicious warmth that made me want to spread my legs. My mind kept going back to Alan and what he might have planned. His hands doing things. His mouth. Sometimes toys and other times nothing more than his cock plunging into me until he is satisified. I shift again, this time because I feel that tingle between my legs and the building moisture. It is probably his plan, he is probably off to the side watching me get hornier. I tug on the bindings that hold my wrists over my head, I want to touch myself. Now.
The sun has crept past my belly filling me with warmth even as I wish I were filled with pancakes. Cock then pancakes. It takes a few tries before I can clear my throat even as I mentally thank Alan for not gagging me this time.
"Alan?" My voice startles the birds and I hear their frantic beating of wings rush by me. All of my senses are heightened, the sun feels like it is sinking into my skin. It makes me sweat and slide on the plastic below me even as the occasional breeze tickles my nipples harder. I take another deep breath and try to call him louder but not make it sound panicky. I can play too.
"Alan baby...I know you're there watching me. Wanting to fuck me. Oh baby you just want to come over here and touch me as bad as I want to touch you." I try the sexy cajoling first on him. Spreading my legs as far as the bindings allow, I raise up in an arch offering my body to Alan. The sun hits my wet openess, making my body flush and go so much wetter. Involunatarily I moan thinking of how I look and how much Alan is enjoying this all. Behind my blindfold I imagine I'm so wet I must glisten under the sun.
I drop flat against the surface in frustration. This isn't fun anymore. I'm all horny and alone and Alan isn't saying a word. I refuse to freak out. I refused to imagine bears or a group of Japanese tourists with fancy new phones broadcasting me worldwide. Broadcasting the puddle that I feel forming under my ass. Oh god I want Alan.
"Please, please Alan I don't want to wait anymore! This isn't fair Alan I've been here for at least an hour. I'm thirsty and I have to pee so just let me go okay?". I hate the quaver in my voice but it feels like hours and hours have passed. The only reason I know it hasn't is the position of the sun crossing my body. The intense heat making me hot and melty. Limp heavy, soporific. My mind is active though. Bouncing between imagining how it would feel when Alan is finally fucking me and the kernal of worry at his lengthy silence.
Rubbing my thighs together helps, it feels so good but makes me need more. Much more. All of more.
"Yeah okay this is NOT FUN ALAN I"M GETTING MAD NOW!" A definite sound of panic in that but I no longer care. This isn't how the game is played. The game is not scary, it is exciting and often new but it is never truly scary and this is heading there fast. "Anyone?"
Rapidly I begin to review the actions of the night before. It was Friday, end of the week go out and party night. I squinch my eyes tight under the blindfold and Iconcentrate on what I realize are fuzzy memories. I hadn't drunk that much had I?
The auto-pilot drive home from work. Bitching to myself because I didn't have any CD's and it was all just afternoon stupid chatter on the radio. I remember showering and shaving all over, my usual Friday pre-going out ritual for Alan. A party! I wiggle in relief as some memories become more clear. I wore a halter top dress with no stockings and we went to a party uptown. People that Alan knew. From there it goes foggy again. Music, food and drinks passed around. Laughter.. then dizziness. Then I woke up here.
Arousal gone I pull in a lung full of air to scream for help, something is so very wrong. The moment I open my mouth fabric is shoved in and I choke. I try to pull free, using all my muscles like an animal caught in a trap. Alan would have spoken by now. I don't know where I am, or who is with me.
I cry out through the wad of cloth as a sharp fingernail taps my chin. Utterly still, I hold still as the nail pushes in and travels down the center of my throat. It is a womans touch. The harsh touch glides down my sweatsoaked body, between my breasts and my nipples go rock hard. Not out of desire but out of fear. She doesn't pause until she reaches the very top of my still wet slit. Long hair brushes across my shoulder and face. A soft whisper reaches me even as her fingertip slides down and into me. Effortlessly her finger dips into my juices and she runs her nail up and down my slit making me shudder. In and out she moves her finger, roughly adding a second which makes me cry out again. My body betrays me, the long wait for the fun game filled my body with need for too long. I lift to her finger and whimper through the gag. She laughs softly and moves her fingers faster and rubs my clit with her thumb. She presses my clit against me, holding my orgasm back as her fingers make me wetter and wetter. The only sounds are her inaudible whispers, my panting and the noises of her fingers making me body do what she wants it to do. I have no control only the deepest wrenching need to cum on her fingers. Nevermind I had no interest in women sexually, nevermind what else was happening. There was nothing else, only hot wet pulsating flesh being teased. Only a woman would know exactly how to touch like this. Only a woman who knew her own intimate places would find another womans so fast. So unwillingly.
Her whisper gets louder as I get closer to cumming. My hips writh under her hand and I'm panting through my nose for air. A continuous moan from my throat sounds as every second her fingers force me closer.
I'm hitting the edge so close oh god fuck me fuck me I don't care just fuck me. I'm trying to say the words but I can't. All I can do is lift up as high as I can while her fingers drive into me. Just as I am cumming she yanks her hand free and I am empty. Wet open empty.
"Alan is mine you bitch."




bornsynner -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 4:53:16 PM)

great story camille.. very descriptive .. keep it going




camille65 -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 5:20:20 PM)

Thanks. Heh the ending would have been against TOS so I had to snip it off.




lilmissattitude -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 5:38:58 PM)

oh and i so wanted to see how it ended




girlygurl -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 5:40:47 PM)

Asher... I never read more than a few lines if at all in a long or in your case semi-long IMO thread...  (ADD when it comes to long winded threads) but I'm glad I read yours.  I enjoyed it very much, thank you.  I just posted a comment on a similar thread....

Dark Shadows anyone?  Vampire TV show way back in the day (I'm old [8D]) dayum... I got excited watching that show as an innocent young thang!

girly




Feric -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 6:03:25 PM)

As the dark stranger steps forward, his mouth gaping wide like a cavern, the stalactite teeth beginning to arc down my hand goes to the small of my back and comes out with a present. His attention is so fixated upon my neck that he never sees the sharpened tent stake coming up between us, but he feels it strike home. His happy, slavering grin instantly becomes a grimace of pain, and from his mouth comes a groan of pain which quickly becomes a shriek. My right foot snakes behind his and I leap forward, my weight slamming him to the ground even as I drive the wood into his heart. Blood gushes from his mouth and chest and his skin dries up like old parchment; the body begins to collapse and his hands are falling away to dust. But before the end he manages to ask me, "How? Why?" I grin back at him and laugh, "You forgot the vampire's first rule: study your victim, and choose carefully!" Dissolution, and a fresh wind blows his ashes away. All around me, I feel the world rejoice at my triumph!




Griswold -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 9:06:52 PM)

DAYUM that was written well!!!!

Is that yours?




Griswold -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 9:08:00 PM)

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ORIGINAL: Darcyandthedark

The words need spacing better, and the paragraphs are poor.  The grammar is adequate, but there is no depth to the writing.  You have not given any time for the reader to identify with the characters.  It lacks emotion.  It is rushed.  Like bad poetry it lacks substance.
Out of 10 I give 3.
 
the.dark.

 
Yeah, but other than that...you liked it...right?




Asherdelampyr -> RE: Erotic tales (1/18/2008 10:10:53 PM)

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ORIGINAL: Griswold

DAYUM that was written well!!!!

Is that yours?
thanks, and yes, thats the kind of thing that happens when I've drunk enough Vodka to convince myself that I can write. :P

And Girly, thank you too... A friend of mine actually has that show on his computer

Also... MORE STORIES!!!!! I have 8 hours at a job I hate, give me something to look foward too




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