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Erotic Haiku - 5/28/2005 1:33:38 PM

lepus

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I did some of these for a laugh some time back, a couple of them are ok.
Thought they might serve as some manner of introduction here:-

filthy depressing bitch
sets my cock on fire
and then pisses on it

too close to touch you
each heartbeat takes forever
I could die waiting

i'm your postman
i fill your box
love letters in dirty envelopes

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RE: Erotic Haiku - 5/28/2005 2:09:07 PM

stef

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None of those are haiku. It could be argued that they're senryu, but certainkly not haiku.

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RE: Erotic Haiku - 5/28/2005 2:16:01 PM

lepus

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ok pedant, care to enlighten us as to why?

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RE: Erotic Haiku - 5/28/2005 7:21:00 PM

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Not particularly. Perhaps if you ask nicely next time.

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RE: Erotic Haiku - 6/1/2005 6:25:57 PM

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