RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share?

Collarspace Discussion Forums

Home Login Search

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share?

View related threads: (in this forum | in all forums)

Logged in as: Guest

All Forums >> [Casual Banter] >> Polls and Other Random Stupidity >> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share?

Page: << < prev 1 2 3 [4]

Message

<< Older Topic Newer Topic >>

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/15/2008 5:04:20 AM

SinLee

Posts: 2876
Joined: 11/8/2007
From: Jersey girl, back in jersey
Status: offline

thanks for reading. i try to write forms once in awhile (sonnets and others), they're difficult sometimes to get the true emotion across in. glad it touched you :)

_____________________________

I'm A dirty little whore, not YOUR dirty little whore!

(in reply to suzybeth)

Profile

Post #: 61

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/15/2008 5:21:11 AM

mindfullyYours

Posts: 8
Joined: 7/5/2006
Status: offline

respectfully offered:

                            i write to know i’m me.
                   i write to be me.
                             i write to feel like me.
                   i write, “me”
                           and then sign my name
                       -Redundantly

(in reply to SinLee)

Profile

Post #: 62

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/15/2008 12:17:01 PM

SinLee

Posts: 2876
Joined: 11/8/2007
From: Jersey girl, back in jersey
Status: offline

nice, mindfully :)

Torn.

I sit obsessing over every detail of you that i have come to know
i obsess over every line and every curve of your face
i obsess over that look in your eyes that could pierce steel
i obsess over those lips, commands they could bring, or kisses
i obsess over your voice that burns through my body like fire
but then i look down, away from your face, away from you
i wonder what you think about when it's not my words in your ear
i wonder what you want from me, if it's more than just on here
i wonder what you see in me, if anything at all
i wonder how i need you so much, not knowing you at all
i wonder if you could be what i think you are
or if i'm just creating another false idol of who i want you to be
i obsess about the words you speak to me, i wish always for more
i obsess about the time we share, and our time apart
i obsess about all the little things that make you steal my heart
i obsess about your health and happiness, wishing i could do more
i obsess about your life before, and what of your life ahead
do you ever wonder about me kneeling before you, to serve, to please
i wonder if you'll ever allow me to come to you on my knees
i wonder if you even want me to be more than just your tease
i wonder if you're looking for someone to be at your side
i wonder if you were, would you let me try
i wonder so often, i wonder why i wonder anymore.

So tell me, do i please you? Do you want more than just a toy?
Am I just another stupid girl with a crush on a cute little boy?

Do you want me to want you, the way that i do?
Could you ever consider wanting me as much as i want you?

Sinamynlee

_____________________________

I'm A dirty little whore, not YOUR dirty little whore!

(in reply to mindfullyYours)

Profile

Post #: 63

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/17/2008 12:06:00 PM

favesclava

Posts: 1608
Joined: 2/15/2007
Status: offline

i never saw my beauty til He looked at me
never knew my strength til i knelt at His feet
never knew how to be free til His chains were on me.
-------------------------------------------------------
i have wandered but have found home
and this need to please is so strong
He took me by my hand and said "Mine"
looked and saw past my disguise
what no other could see
the lonely little girl in me
showed me pain and pleasure are one
when touched by such a Man.

------------------------------------------
COLLARED

The collar around my neck
tells me its too late
never had a chance
silly girl

The collar around my neck
but i wont love Him
wont let Him into my heart
He's the Master He will take what He wants
silly girl

The collar around my neck
tells me i am owned
body , mind , heart and soul
lucky girl

_____________________________

weird is relative not an absolute term. Baron Frank N. Furter
Resident jingly dancing girl
The Pookie Of Darkness
Okay? Ready? Fine .Here's my hand. We are going now. I know the way. All you have to do is hold on tight ... and believe.SK

(in reply to SinLee)

Profile

Post #: 64

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/18/2008 2:50:28 PM

babygirlangel

Posts: 110
Joined: 2/16/2006
Status: offline

edited to say... ok, maybe this is a bit much for here... but i'll leave it anyway

The Flood

Many times I’ve thought I’ve said all there is to say
Yet the feelings behind the words refuse to go away
I force down each repetitive negative thought
Yet behind them my feelings remain fraught
I can’t stop feeling like there’s something wrong
I can’t make it better, I’ve never been that strong
These words aren’t the ones that really want out
So many times I just want to cry and shout
I cant figure out how to just say what I mean, for real
Its maddening, always needing to apologize for what I feel
When asked if I’m ok I just nod and go on, turning and taking flight
You know when people ask, they’re really just being polite
I try to behave as an adult should, restrained, calm, collected
Hoping on the outside that my feelings aren’t detected
Yet, too, wishing that I could just let these feelings go
Knowing the consequences should they continue to grow
But someday the day will come, sooner than later for me
What little control I have will lapse and then I’ll be…
Raving like a mad woman futilely against the bars of my prison cell,
Internalizing everything until the dam breaks and pours out my hell
Torrents of hate and hurt drowning everyone I know or love
Seeing in their eyes their bewilderment, as I thrash and shove
I stifle my emotions because it’s better than exploding
So I stifle them again and again, without emptying, reloading
And it builds and builds like a storm waiting to break
A cataclysm in the making, my foundations shake
So, I stay awake, not sleeping till I’m exhausted, almost all night
Not wanting to wake again, it hurts to face the light
Wearing myself out until I’m too tired to feel pain
Even though I know I’ll just have to do it again
I never really want to get up and face the next day
It’ll just be the same thing again in a slightly different way
I don’t know why I feel so much hurt, so much hate
I don’t know if I made myself this way or if it was fate
Even though I don’t place much faith in much of anything
I still have a belief that there must be some… thing…
Perhaps someone to hold me and take care of me
Or maybe being all alone so I can’t be hurt, you see
Inside and out, I’m always looking for the cure
Maybe I’m the problem, simple and pure
The cause doesn’t seem nearly so important now
Whatever it may be, I must stand or bow
Calm on the outside, inside swirling in confusion
Waiting for the end, death or resolution

< Message edited by babygirlangel -- 6/18/2008 2:52:09 PM >

_____________________________

Because of you, I find it hard to trust not only me, but everyone around me, Because of you I am afraid...

(in reply to favesclava)

Profile

Post #: 65

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/19/2008 6:43:46 AM

favesclava

Posts: 1608
Joined: 2/15/2007
Status: offline

wow.

_____________________________

weird is relative not an absolute term. Baron Frank N. Furter
Resident jingly dancing girl
The Pookie Of Darkness
Okay? Ready? Fine .Here's my hand. We are going now. I know the way. All you have to do is hold on tight ... and believe.SK

(in reply to babygirlangel)

Profile

Post #: 66

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/19/2008 7:24:54 AM

SinLee

Posts: 2876
Joined: 11/8/2007
From: Jersey girl, back in jersey
Status: offline

Death comes to all, one before another.

so, indeed, came the days
when i existed soley for the look in your eyes
and when my sight faded
i lived in memory

then came the days
when i lived for the sound of your voice
when you would sing to me
the songs of our first months together
and in the french i taught you
you would whisper that you loved me
but my hearing faded
and again i lived in memory

i learned to live only
in the sweetness of your gentle kiss
and nothing meant more to me
your loving kiss in the middle of the night
when you believed i slept
but i lost the feeling in my face
and could no longer feel your soft lips
so again, i would remember

and i once, not long ago
lived singly for your warm embrace
the feel of your fingers, your hands
your arms against my skin
trying to wash away my pain
but i can no longer feel them
i wish to remember, but...

i live now only in pain
in my conciousness, knowing
i can never see the tender look of your blue eyes
nor hear the beautiful words eminate from your mouth
nor taste the succulant sweetness of your kiss
nor may i feel the sensuality, the comfort of your embrace

i remember when i knew them,
took for granted the signs of your love
let me die now,
before i know not if i die alone
Je t'aime, mon cher. Au revoir.
Until i may know you again.

sinamynlee

_____________________________

I'm A dirty little whore, not YOUR dirty little whore!

(in reply to favesclava)

Profile

Post #: 67

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/19/2008 9:48:40 PM

babygirlangel

Posts: 110
Joined: 2/16/2006
Status: offline

now THAT was awesome, SinLee.. thanks for sharing

_____________________________

Because of you, I find it hard to trust not only me, but everyone around me, Because of you I am afraid...

(in reply to SinLee)

Profile

Post #: 68

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/19/2008 11:49:04 PM

SinLee

Posts: 2876
Joined: 11/8/2007
From: Jersey girl, back in jersey
Status: offline

thank you so much babygirl, yours was as well, this one was actually written when i was about 16... i've always loved to write (hence why i keep posting in here, lol)

_____________________________

I'm A dirty little whore, not YOUR dirty little whore!

(in reply to babygirlangel)

Profile

Post #: 69

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/20/2008 5:25:08 AM

puppen

Posts: 1550
Joined: 6/25/2006
Status: offline

I will await you
In death
In sin
Burning

Bwahaha, short.

_____________________________

(Self proclaimed)
Resident Libra

(in reply to tsatske)

Profile

Post #: 70

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 6/20/2008 6:04:33 AM

SinLee

Posts: 2876
Joined: 11/8/2007
From: Jersey girl, back in jersey
Status: offline

Eclipse

We are the sun
and the moon
we are together
we are apart
I am the sun
he is the moon
we are occasionally
seen together
and we shine together
in perfect harmony
and sometimes
we come together
so perfectly
that all else fades
to black.

Sinamynlee

_____________________________

I'm A dirty little whore, not YOUR dirty little whore!

(in reply to puppen)

Profile

Post #: 71

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 7/21/2008 12:26:39 AM

SweetNika

Posts: 955
Joined: 4/19/2008
From: Forest Hills, Maryland
Status: offline

Sir...

By: Nika

07/20/08

Sir,

I kneel before you

Supplicant

Pleading in silence for your simple touch

Pleasure and pain intertwined

Ecstasy in the power exchange

Burning desire

Quivering flesh

Bend me to your will

Claim me as yours

Dominate my very being

Bend me to your will

Hold me close

Protecting me from the wilds of the world

As I serve you,

Please you,

We two fulfill one another’s every need

You are my Sir and I am yours.

_____________________________

Blessed be,
Nika

(in reply to SinLee)

Profile

Post #: 72

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 7/21/2008 12:41:49 AM

SweetNika

Posts: 955
Joined: 4/19/2008
From: Forest Hills, Maryland
Status: offline

Strange Desire.....
By Nika
07/17/08

My breath grows weary,
My tanned cheeks flush ,
My ache, my desire…
To feel your touch,
Your hand upon my raven hair,
I desire to be yours,
To have you push me further,
To own my very soul,
Driven by simple need,
By the desire to please,
At your feet is where I long to be.

Your touch,
You calm my racing heart,
You answer my childish inquiries,
My desire can not seem so stranger…
You are strong and enticing,
Like the north wind that blows,
Your desire for me is fleeting.

Your eyes,
Your gaze upon me lasting only a heart beat,
In the dim moon light ,
Can you the desire I try to hide?
The warmth of my lips,
The wanting of my flesh,
My pleading eyes -
Do they reveal to you what I hide so deep inside?

I once had a strange desire,
It lasted for seasons,
My heart beats within my heaving breasts,
Bathing in the moon beams this night,
Silent, afraid, slightly ashamed,
Of this strange wanting,
Of this strange desire,
To be yours.

Your friend, your slave, your slut, your every desire.

_____________________________

Blessed be,
Nika

(in reply to SweetNika)

Profile

Post #: 73

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 8/12/2008 7:40:23 AM

favesclava

Posts: 1608
Joined: 2/15/2007
Status: offline

if i had known
i wouldnt have said a word
if i had known
i would have cried alone
if i had known
my pain would have been mine alone

if i had known
i would never kneel again
if i had known i would never
be daddy's girl again
if i had know the collar wasnt so strong
i would have never said a word

if i had known how much i have lost
my heart would have built higher walls
if i had known how useless it is
to believe in dreams
i would have cried lone
i would have never said a word

_____________________________

weird is relative not an absolute term. Baron Frank N. Furter
Resident jingly dancing girl
The Pookie Of Darkness
Okay? Ready? Fine .Here's my hand. We are going now. I know the way. All you have to do is hold on tight ... and believe.SK

(in reply to SweetNika)

Profile

Post #: 74

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 8/23/2008 10:17:44 AM

TwilightShadows

Posts: 68
Joined: 1/4/2008
From: twilight
Status: offline

Not to be a party pooper, but I suggest you all copywright. It's cheap and it's easy, and you won't have the unpleasant experience of reading your bastardized words elsewhere.

That being said....I just posted a poem in my journal on my profile.

(in reply to Icarys)

Profile

Post #: 75

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 8/23/2008 10:37:02 AM

Raechard

Posts: 3513
Joined: 3/10/2007
From: S.E. London U.K.
Status: offline

Ah no one reads them after they fall off the bottom of the list.

_____________________________

えへまにんへえや
Nobody wants to listen to the same song over and over again!

(in reply to TwilightShadows)

Profile

Post #: 76

RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? - 8/23/2008 11:56:13 AM

christine1

Posts: 6155
Joined: 12/15/2007
From: i'm headed to HIM...
Status: offline

quote:

ORIGINAL: Level

There once was a dom from Nantucket
Who got his head stuck in a bucket

I'm still working on the rest.....

He woke up with a fright,
in the mid of the night,
and he said, i'd be better off if i fucked it.

sorry, i tried.

_____________________________

i am woman! er, godzilla! hear me roar!

http://wavcentral.com/cgi-bin/log/log.cgi?id=2856&sound=/sounds/movies/godzilla/roar.mp3

He's the "boom" overwhelming...

He is my Master, my lover, my best friend my everything.

(in reply to Level)

Profile

Post #: 77