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Icarys -> Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:07:32 PM)

I enjoy reading others personal poetry..so if you'd like to share..feel free
i would appreciate it.

i can feel the rhythm of her heart
beating next to mine
a sense of being found and yet being lost
in the endless gaze of her loving eyes
our bodies touch for what seems like eternity
fused together as one,skin on skin
embracing the sweetness of her inner light
we dive deeper into one another, drowning without care
i gasp for her,she is in my very breath
the pulse that quickens in my veins
the essence of our souls, intertwined
we love as one, bound not by distance or time



Level -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:32:53 PM)

There once was a dom from Nantucket
Who got his head stuck in a bucket
 
I'm still working on the rest..... [8|]



youngsubgeoff -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:39:08 PM)

This mask
beautiful
in its simplicity
a perfect expression
The negation
of a human soul

expressionless
as you always
wanted me to be
no feeling
no thoughts

Behind this mask
you cannot see
my eyes
Or the pain
that they hold

trapped inside
not allowed
to exist
to know
to say

and

you will never see
behind this mask
because it is
all you want
to see

I am nothing
to you
a negation
not alive
just a toy


Inspired by a MushroomHead mask



Icarys -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:42:24 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Level

There once was a dom from Nantucket
Who got his head stuck in a bucket
 
I'm still working on the rest..... [8|]

lol..probably not gonna see the inside of a page in a published book but it's a start :>



Icarys -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:43:58 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: youngsubgeoff

This mask
beautiful
in its simplicity
a perfect expression
The negation
of a human soul

expressionless
as you always
wanted me to be
no feeling
no thoughts

Behind this mask
you cannot see
my eyes
Or the pain
that they hold

trapped inside
not allowed
to exist
to know
to say

and

you will never see
behind this mask
because it is
all you want
to see

I am nothing
to you
a negation
not alive
just a toy


Inspired by a MushroomHead mask

I like that.



xxblushesxx -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:44:13 PM)

Why is this in stupidity
When a rhyme of this lucidity
Obviously belongs
in 'off topic' or
even 'ask a Dom'



Level -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:47:59 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Icarys

quote:

ORIGINAL: Level

There once was a dom from Nantucket
Who got his head stuck in a bucket
 
I'm still working on the rest..... [8|]

lol..probably not gonna see the inside of a page in a published book but it's a start :>



[:D]

You've begun  a good thread, hopefully some some of our talented posters will build on your and geoff's start.



Icarys -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:48:37 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: xxblushesxx

Why is this in stupidity
When a rhyme of this lucidity
Obviously belongs
in 'off topic' or
even 'ask a Dom'

nice try :>nice profile too.



Icarys -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:49:52 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Level

quote:

ORIGINAL: Icarys

quote:

ORIGINAL: Level

There once was a dom from Nantucket
Who got his head stuck in a bucket
 
I'm still working on the rest..... [8|]

lol..probably not gonna see the inside of a page in a published book but it's a start :>



[:D]

You've begun  a good thread, hopefully some some of our talented posters will build on your and geoff's start.

Thanks.i hope so.



xxblushesxx -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 6:59:06 PM)

I used to have tons of (actually good) poetry. Along with alot of very bad, because...well...they can't all be winners.
It's all gone now.
Computer crashes and other stuff.[:o]



celticlord2112 -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:02:31 PM)

Kneel slave --
Woman under my hand.
Raise your eyes to me
Raise your spirit to me
Raise your hope to me

Kneel slave --
Woman under my hand
Yield your flesh to me
Yield your soul to me
Yield your life to me

Kneel slave --
Woman under my hand
Open your thoughts to me
Open your mind to me
Open your heart to me

Kneel slave --
Woman under my hand




Icarys -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:03:31 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: xxblushesxx

I used to have tons of (actually good) poetry. Along with alot of very bad, because...well...they can't all be winners.
It's all gone now.
Computer crashes and other stuff.[:o]

I'm sorry to hear that.I would've loved to have seen some.



servantheart -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:09:07 PM)

Swoon! [:)][sm=yesmaster.gif]



celticlord2112 -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:10:30 PM)

Did I mention how much I like a worshipful audience? [8D][:D]



xxblushesxx -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:14:01 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Icarys

quote:

ORIGINAL: xxblushesxx

I used to have tons of (actually good) poetry. Along with alot of very bad, because...well...they can't all be winners.
It's all gone now.
Computer crashes and other stuff.[:o]

I'm sorry to hear that.I would've loved to have seen some.



Yeah, me too.
I have one little thing in my profile, (or journal...Idk,) and some things over the last few years in the poetry section of the bondage dot com site. (I am coquette886 there.)



Icarys -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:19:48 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: xxblushesxx

quote:

ORIGINAL: Icarys

quote:

ORIGINAL: xxblushesxx

I used to have tons of (actually good) poetry. Along with alot of very bad, because...well...they can't all be winners.
It's all gone now.
Computer crashes and other stuff.[:o]

I'm sorry to hear that.I would've loved to have seen some.



Yeah, me too.
I have one little thing in my profile, (or journal...Idk,) and some things over the last few years in the poetry section of the bondage dot com site. (I am coquette886 there.)

I'll check it out, thanks.



Icarys -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:28:48 PM)

They require a profile and i don't have one..don't really feel like making one either lol.one's enough.well one site anyway...



celticlord2112 -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:35:54 PM)

There are no more battles to fight.
There are no more wars to win.
There are no more dragons to slay.

He is the unchallenged champion.
He is the unquestioned master.
He is the unbowed hero.

Every foe he has defeated.
Every quest he has achieved.
Every maiden he has rescued.

He is the unchallenged champion.
He is the unquestioned master.
He is the unbowed hero.

His sword hangs limply at his side.
His armor rusts in the hall.
His horse roams content in the pasture.

He is the unchallenged champion.
He is the unquestioned master.
He is the unbowed hero.

The people have other concerns.
Peace brings its own problems.
The knight has had his day.

Yes, he was the unchallenged champion.
Yes, he was the unquestioned master.
Yes, he was the unbowed hero.



Icarys -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:38:35 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: celticlord2112

There are no more battles to fight.
There are no more wars to win.
There are no more dragons to slay.

He is the unchallenged champion.
He is the unquestioned master.
He is the unbowed hero.

Every foe he has defeated.
Every quest he has achieved.
Every maiden he has rescued.

He is the unchallenged champion.
He is the unquestioned master.
He is the unbowed hero.

His sword hangs limply at his side.
His armor rusts in the hall.
His horse roams content in the pasture.

He is the unchallenged champion.
He is the unquestioned master.
He is the unbowed hero.

The people have other concerns.
Peace brings its own problems.
The knight has had his day.

Yes, he was the unchallenged champion.
Yes, he was the unquestioned master.
Yes, he was the unbowed hero.

Thanks, hopefully this will catch on.



tsatske -> RE: Poetry..If that's what you'd call it..Care to share? (6/11/2008 7:49:48 PM)

Spark of God

Not until the Sun refuses You,
Do I Refuse You.
Not until the Son Rebukes You,
Can I find fault.
Not until the Father has cast you out,
Can I Judge You.

Until the Body proclaims You cut off,
We are Kin.
Until the Tao itself rejects You,
We are Bond.
Until the Master Turns His back to You,
We are of one blood.

As Long as the wind kisses your cheek,
My desire will be the same.
As Long as Fire can Warm You,
You will have a home, in my heart.

As long as Love Abides on Earth,
It holds strong between us.
I can not forget-
You are the Face of God



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