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kiwisub12 -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 4:20:04 PM)

Master D - if you break your essays up into paragraphs, they would be a lot easier to read. [:)]



colouredin -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 4:26:58 PM)

TBH I think he just posts them and doesnt bother reading the responsesw, people have said on everyone of his threads that its bloody hard to read, i doubt it will make one jot of differance



sambamanslilgirl -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 4:40:48 PM)

*rubbing eyes* - wow, this reads as if you c/p from someone else ...and i couldn't continue after the first few sentences.

mho



OsideGirl -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 4:47:07 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: colouredin

TBH I think he just posts them and doesnt bother reading the responsesw, people have said on everyone of his threads that its bloody hard to read, i doubt it will make one jot of differance
Yes, I sincerely doubt he cares what any one of us thinks. His thoughts are obviously, the only ones that count.



WinsomeDefiance -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 4:51:15 PM)

To be fair to the OP, I did a test for plagiarism, and only came up with his blog on bondage.com.  I'll run my own writing through it, before submitting it, and find the tool useful.  I know his copy and paste essay reads like a stolen novel, but nothing came up to substantiate the first impression many of us picked up on.



windchymes -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 4:55:17 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Padriag

Eh... here's my essay on The Successful Master.

The Successful Master is easily recognized by their happy grin, indicating they have what they want, how they want and when they wanted it.

The End.

.oO(Was that too long?) [8D]

And that IS a really awesome tree you have. [:D]



kiyari -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 5:09:01 PM)

Authoratative, whiny, provocative VANILLA CONE OPs.

WHEN will we EVER learn?!?

...just sayin'  [8|]



CarrieO -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 5:10:48 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: OsideGirl

quote:

ORIGINAL: colouredin

TBH I think he just posts them and doesnt bother reading the responsesw, people have said on everyone of his threads that its bloody hard to read, i doubt it will make one jot of differance
Yes, I sincerely doubt he cares what any one of us thinks. His thoughts are obviously, the only ones that count.



Agreed.  These are his journal entries...Not debate or discussion.  I read each of his posts and I think it would have been so much better if he had simply started each with "in my opinion" instead of trying to post them as enlightened text.

Also, the "child-like" view he implies in reference to subs, imo, is a bit too condescending for my taste.

Just my [sm=2cents.gif]



DesFIP -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 5:21:40 PM)

Found the site it came from. No way to know if it's his site or not.
http://sirdavidc.multiply.com/journal/item/154



MadRabbit -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 5:46:16 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: DesFIP

Found the site it came from. No way to know if it's his site or not.
http://sirdavidc.multiply.com/journal/item/154


Sounds like he found exactly what to write to attract online submissives.



CalifChick -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 5:48:04 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: DesFIP

Found the site it came from. No way to know if it's his site or not.
http://sirdavidc.multiply.com/journal/item/154


Well, they're both black, and they both have a mustache.  Other than that, doesn't look like the same person, althought it's difficult to say being that there appears to be at least a 50 pound, to perhaps 100 pound difference in the two photos.

Cali



GreedyTop -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 5:58:22 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Padriag

Eh... here's my essay on The Successful Master.

The Successful Master is easily recognized by their happy grin, indicating they have what they want, how they want and when they wanted it.

The End.

.oO(Was that too long?) [8D]


I think you need to edit for space.



DesFIP -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 6:04:56 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: MadRabbit
Sounds like he found exactly what to write to attract online submissives.


Bores them into submission?




BKSir -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 6:15:07 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: Padriag

Eh... here's my essay on The Successful Master.

The Successful Master is easily recognized by their happy grin, indicating they have what they want, how they want and when they wanted it.

The End.

.oO(Was that too long?) [8D]


A bit long maybe, but, pretty much dead fu***ng on the money. [:D]



greeneyedreamer -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 7:03:04 PM)

Being a Catholic School Girl a nun I had once told us a quote from Shakespeare I believe... "Brevity is the soul of wit" Enough said...

Dreamer



AquaticSub -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 7:17:57 PM)

~Fast Reply~

*chuckles* I was going to add something but, having read through the responses... friends speak my mind. [:)]



WinsomeDefiance -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 7:57:42 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: CalifChick

quote:

ORIGINAL: DesFIP

Found the site it came from. No way to know if it's his site or not.
http://sirdavidc.multiply.com/journal/item/154


Well, they're both black, and they both have a mustache.  Other than that, doesn't look like the same person, althought it's difficult to say being that there appears to be at least a 50 pound, to perhaps 100 pound difference in the two photos.

Cali



Rutroh....I thought it odd that someone could be so verbose on the overall subject matter, and misspell two of his three post titles. 



Rover -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 8:45:44 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: DesFIP

Found the site it came from. No way to know if it's his site or not.
http://sirdavidc.multiply.com/journal/item/154


Evidently he (or David C if it's someone else) has been a prolific writer.  And while each of the articles is written in a manner that makes reading them quite a chore, I did manage to find this little gem:

quote:

 
I strongly feel that a good and true dominant should have a strong sense of honor, love, and responsibility to his or her submissive to spill her endorphins whenever possible, but seriously, his or her submissive should become the center of his or her attention and the soul of his or her very existence. 


I find this wrong on so many levels that if I get started listing them I'll miss my bedtime.
 
John



Rover -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 8:53:08 PM)

Or how about this one....

quote:

 
Sadomasochism has been called "power exchange sexuality," signifying that the submissive partner gives up all personal power to the dominant.  The dominant partner accepts this gift and, in exchange, assumes power over and responsibility for the well-being of the submissive for whatever period of time they have negotiated.


And here I thought a sadomasochist derived pleasure from both inflicting and receiving pain and doesn't require any power exchange at all.  Silly me.
 
John



Rover -> RE: THE SUCCESFUL MASTER (11/23/2008 9:06:12 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: WinsomeDefiance

To be fair to the OP, I did a test for plagiarism, and only came up with his blog on bondage.com.  I'll run my own writing through it, before submitting it, and find the tool useful.  I know his copy and paste essay reads like a stolen novel, but nothing came up to substantiate the first impression many of us picked up on.


Actually, I can substantiate beyond any doubt that he is a plagiarist.  This essay of "his" has entire sentences and paragraphs lifted verbatim from an article of mine, written in 2001:
 
http://sirdavidc.multiply.com/journal/item/131
 
John



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