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New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:13:07 PM   
BeowulfKaine


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From: Tulsa Oklahoma
Status: offline 		Hello everyone, first time poster. I have a question for anyone that will answer (and appreciate it btw) I have had a very low reply rate in seeking a slave, I'm not overly demanding, nor am I in any hurry to meet someone as I want them to be comfortable, but I really am not getting any replies. Can anyone look over my profile and maybe see if I am coming across too much in any way that would seem over the top, even for BDSM?

profile: BeowulfKaine

Thanks!

Beowulf
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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:18:13 PM   
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Status: offline 		You are seeking a woman to commit to a married man. It is a difficult situation to be involved in.

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:22:11 PM   
Aylee


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Status: offline 		Lose the foul language.  Fix your apostrophe issues. 

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:25:20 PM   
BossyShoeBitch


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Status: offline 		I think the spirit of the profile is ok. But it's a rough draft. It needs to be tweaked and rewritten a few more times.

I'd get rid of the first paragraph and lead with the second. I'd also explain in depth whether your wife will be meeting her too, what the dynamics are expected to be and how that will work.

I'd also get rid of the pics with the longer hair and concentrate on the ones with the shorter hair.

Address the women as people first, list some vanilla aspects of your life as well..


...just a few notes off the top of my head..

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:27:23 PM   
breatheasone


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Status: offline 		i personally would not feel compelled to write after reading that profile...(i'm speaking as if i were in your age group, which i don't consider myself) If you have any questions feel free to send me a "c-mail"

< Message edited by breatheasone -- 11/14/2009 9:28:58 PM >

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:28:09 PM   
BeowulfKaine


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From: Tulsa Oklahoma
Status: offline 		Wait, do you think I look better with short hair? My wife said the same thing! ButI've been wanting to grow my hair long for the longest time, thank you for your suggestions, i do agree with them, I think i will follow through on those, keep them coming everyone!

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:30:50 PM   
BeowulfKaine


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Status: offline 		I would appreciate it if you could tell me what exactly put you off, or maybe made you feel "uncompelled"

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:32:49 PM   
BossyShoeBitch


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quote:

ORIGINAL: BeowulfKaine

Wait, do you think I look better with short hair?

Yes.
quote:

My wife said the same thing!

Sounds like a smart woman. I myself prefer the "clean cut" look.

quote:

ButI've been wanting to grow my hair long for the longest time,


Well grow it out then. Hope that works out for you. :)



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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:35:34 PM   
breatheasone


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quote:

ORIGINAL: BeowulfKaine

I would appreciate it if you could tell me what exactly put you off, or maybe made you feel "uncompelled"

i would be happy to answer that.... Would you prefer a "c-mail", or here on the message board?


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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:35:56 PM   
BeowulfKaine


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From: Tulsa Oklahoma
Status: offline 		Short of adding more aspect of my vanilla life, the rest of the profile did not seem to much? Definitely going to put the wife dynamic in there, i can't believe I didn't think of that before. Let me ask you this, my wife basically said it was 100% ok to have a save, but she doesn't necessarily want to be involved, but that it wont bother her in the slightest - this being because she had previous experience and she understand the lifestyle and is not threatened by it, how do you recommend I approach this concept? Thank You!

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:37:03 PM   
BeowulfKaine


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Joined: 10/11/2009
From: Tulsa Oklahoma
Status: offline 		Im sorry I have no idea what a c-mail is?

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:38:42 PM   
breatheasone


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Status: offline 		it stands for "Collar me e-mail" ..meaning using the e-mail system here on this site.

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 9:40:12 PM   
BeowulfKaine


Posts: 32
Joined: 10/11/2009
From: Tulsa Oklahoma
Status: offline 		HA! thats funny, I can't believe I didn't figure that out, go ahead and send it here, if there is another person in the future thats having the same problem maybe they can learn as well, let me have it, you wont hurt my feelings, if I need to change something it needs to get done!

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 10:00:34 PM   
breatheasone


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Status: offline 		Ok, you have "c-mail"

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 10:32:08 PM   
BeowulfKaine


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From: Tulsa Oklahoma
Status: offline 		Ok everyone I rewrote my profile, tell me what you think!!

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 10:37:33 PM   
breatheasone


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Status: offline 		i like it better now. 

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/14/2009 11:23:40 PM   
mons


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Status: offline 		hello

i am a dominant women, and i do not and will not answer to a submissive who is married! some find it at least i do it hard to hurt another person in that manner. you will not leave you wife for a submissive .  so it is something a submissive may or may not answer they do not want to share a master . i do not blame them i do not want to share a submissive. yes yours is something hard to answer . you only problem with your profile is your married . that is my opinion

mons

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/15/2009 2:56:59 AM   
Viridana


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I didn't see the original version but I like this version. You seem approachable and honest and that is crucial on this site.

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/15/2009 4:15:06 AM   
GabrielleSlave


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From: in servitude
Status: offline 		i didn't see the original one either, but thumbs up for this one and i sincerely hope you get what you are looking for; you seem like a good guy.

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RE: New Master Here Seeks Opinion of his Profile? - 11/15/2009 5:43:01 AM   
antipode


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quote:

Can anyone look over my profile


I've not looked at your profile, but you need to ask yourself why you ask other masters to help you figure out why your profile doesn't work? It is something you would ask of your target group - subs or slaves, whatever the case may be. They would probably be able to tell you what is wrong with you the best, wouldn't you think? So perhaps you do this more often, looking in the wrong cubbyhole?

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