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i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 12:48:22 PM

Dunhamart

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i try starting up conversations with people and no one seems to respond yeah i got a lot of friends on my profile but i don't feel like i've actually met any if some one could give me an honest critique on my profile that would be great

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 12:52:11 PM

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Dude.. ditch the whole damn thing! lol

You are a dominant, asking female dominants to take a look and help you. Makes about as much sense as your profile does.

I wouldn't know where to start in advising you... I am too busy laughing my ass off at how you could think that profile would work for anyone.

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 12:52:59 PM

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I only read 3 lines of your profile.

You come across immature, agressive and angry as well as homophobic.

Also, all those half naked Dommes you are friends with makes you look like a wanker.

You wanted a true opinion, there you have it.

That said, you might be a sincerely good boy who wants to devote himself to a woman who's earned your respect deep down below, but you are doing absolutely nothing to convey that image.

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 12:54:42 PM

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quote:

You are a dominant, asking female dominants to take a look and help you. Makes about as much sense as your profile does.

Shoot! I didn't even notice he labelled himself as a Dominant!

Even less reason to trust him now as there is no way to whip him into behaving ;-)

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 12:57:47 PM

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He's cross posted this thread in 3 forums so far. I'm guessing 2 of the threads will disappear shortly

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 12:59:01 PM

Dunhamart

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yeah how do i consolidate it all in to one so i don't really piss any one else off about that

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 1:00:48 PM

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ORIGINAL: Dunhamart

yeah how do i consolidate it all in to one so i don't really piss any one else off about that

Well I'd say, stop starting threads would be a good start.

ETA - there is no way to consolidate threads. If a moderators sees this before a thread gets developed, it might be pulled. For now, you'll just have to keep your eye on all of the ones started. Oh and you're going to get some nasty responses because of the aggressivity in your profile, but know that most want to help.

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< Message edited by LadyAngelika -- 1/1/2010 1:02:40 PM >

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 1:02:48 PM

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quote:

ORIGINAL: Dunhamart

i try starting up conversations with people and no one seems to respond yeah i got a lot of friends on my profile but i don't feel like i've actually met any if some one could give me an honest critique on my profile that would be great

Stop gathering female friends pictures ... you come across as being here only for the eye candy.

If you are going to rant in your first few paragraphs then you've lost the battle out of the gate.

Your age may be part of your problem ... as a lot of subs want someone older and with more experience.

On the whole your best bet would be to start from scratch.

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 1:06:56 PM

Dunhamart

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quote:

ORIGINAL: MsLadySue

quote:

ORIGINAL: Dunhamart

i try starting up conversations with people and no one seems to respond yeah i got a lot of friends on my profile but i don't feel like i've actually met any if some one could give me an honest critique on my profile that would be great

Stop gathering female friends pictures ... you come across as being here only for the eye candy.

If you are going to rant in your first few paragraphs then you've lost the battle out of the gate.

Your age may be part of your problem ... as a lot of subs want someone older and with more experience.

On the whole your best bet would be to start from scratch.

thank you that feels like the most civil responce i've had so far you have my most sincerest thank you

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 1:23:42 PM

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The profile I'm using at the moment says "lesbian" and starts off with "I'm looking for a girlfriend," and I still get messages from men. The text in your profile will not deter them. Just block 'em when you get 'em, resolve not to do the same thing to any queer chicks out there, and move on. The only people who will actually pay attention to that negativity are the people you want to attract, and they'll be turned off by the negativity.

"Creativity is a must I am an artist and the one thing I respect the most from any one is creativity and intelligence."

This is a bit of a run-on sentence, but it's gold.

The only other things I'm getting from your profile are that you like a girl who will put up a little bit of a fight, you like skinny girls, and you want someone who will scream in bed. If that's the message you want to put out there, great, but I suspect the girls would really dig the dominant young artist if you gave him a little bit more screen time.

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 1:44:50 PM

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Was that picture taken at your mother's house?

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 1:56:39 PM

Dunhamart

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no my house by my roommate

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 1:58:40 PM

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who cleaned it? If it was you, you already got dommes slobbering over you.

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 2:02:51 PM

Dunhamart

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my roommates wife what the hell does that matter any way

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 2:05:36 PM

mnottertail

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well, if it was you it shows you as an organized and care about your surroundings sort of motherfucker.........but you keep talking like that, by god, you are not gonna get any worthwhile help from anyone out here, but you will have your choices from a plethora of idiots.

take your pick.

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 2:07:19 PM

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LOL... Be nice Ron! Real domina's don't slobber! However, there are a few who would take a houseboy, who cleans, no matter what side of the slash he say's he's on.

Dunhamart... read the boards... get to know the way of the land... grow some thicker skin and you might find out why all that has happened today.. has happened.

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 2:07:56 PM

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Not saying this to be mean, but honestly, do you have a profile? I scanned just a little and all I saw was rants about gay people. Then there was some adolescent sex driven knuckle dragging garbage about you conquering someone in bed....I just stopped reading.

A profile tells about you as a person, vanilla way would be good so the person knows about you. Also, what kind of relationship are you looking for? weekends, 24/7, occassional? You can use the list to the left to tell all what you are "into"

The women on here are not prostitutes so stop talking to them like they are...address them in your profile and your emails just like you would any other woman you might meet on the street or in a coffee shop. Imagine approaching someone on the street like you did in your profile you would either end up in the hospital or jail.

Don't start off the new year being an ass

And another thing, if you are so "real" and so "serious" then why are you asking dominant women about your profile, shouldn't you be asking dominant men? I really hope I haven't wasted my time and this is just another wanker ploy to get the ladies to look at your profile...if so....huge mistake dude.

As someone said, change it all....be respectful, and have a happy new year

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 2:11:38 PM

Dunhamart

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to answer why i asked so many people is cause i wanted a broad range of angels and ideas on the subject

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RE: i need a critique on my profile - 1/1/2010 2:12:28 PM

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