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My Mistake - 9/10/2004 1:12:58 PM   
SentForu


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My Mistake

You came along when I never expected you
We met on an off chance
Through a friend's reaching out to make you happy

Fears
Fears from my past
Fears I could not let go of easily
Fears of letting someone else in

Trust
Trust I don't give lightly
Trust, something which should be earned
Trust that one thing that would take time

I let my guard down
You were everything I wanted in life
The love you had to give

The love I had longed to grasp
I had never experienced before
I didn't know how to act
My questions went unanswered
My fears just grew stronger

My mistake
My jumping to conclusions
Without foundation
All from a past
A past filled with pain and deception
That's all I knew
All I expected
I didn't expect true love

Though I implored you
It just wasn't enough

My Mistake.....
Letting you go Sir

< Message edited by SentForu -- 9/10/2004 1:16:37 PM >


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RE: My Mistake - 9/10/2004 1:51:39 PM   
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Hmm, very nice poem Sent

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RE: My Mistake - 9/10/2004 1:54:33 PM   
SentForu


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Thanks Gloria. It's only my second time writing. Maybe it's not BDSMish enough for this forum?....lol

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