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ishyB -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 6:54:22 AM)

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ORIGINAL: WinsomeDefiance

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ORIGINAL: WyldHrt

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we do know that DNA is passed on through generations and the sins of the father/mother (any STD) mutates the line.

Wow... just, wow.
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Since all traumas are stored in the DNA then we are bound to experience some echoes of ours and our ancestors passed sins.

Ok, I tried.... LMFAO!
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If that is a truism we can all believe then the rest is only semantics.

Trust me, it SO isn't a 'truism' we all believe!



To be fair, DNA mutations can arise from environmental factors, such as viruses.  So, his comment about the sins of the father being passed down, isn't completely off base.  Not as I understand the basics of DNA (and trust me, I only barely grasp the basics!)   However, since most mutations are neutral and have little impact (if any) then simply identifying a DNA mutation probably isn't really going to have much relevence to someone like the OP.  Unless, of course, he's an expert in this field as well as all the others.





Agreed, and there is no evidence whatsoever that "trauma" is stored in DNA, let alone mutates it.

There are a number of things that can affect our DNA like viruses, radiation, chemicals, transposons and errors that occur in cell replication. However, these mutations are not necessarily passed on to the next generation. That only occurs when the mutations happen in our sex cells.

The idea that our "sins" or "traumas" will be passed on to our children through our DNA is absolutely ridiculous and has no basis in science whatsoever.






crazyml -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 6:56:41 AM)

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ORIGINAL: sunshinemiss

This must be a hoax. Noone can be this ...(not being nice anymore... not being nice anymore)... Nobody can have their head this far up their bum to believe the crap they have in this post, the journal, and the profile.


I think I've just fallen in love with you (again)




sunshinemiss -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 6:58:49 AM)

::: thud :::




sirrandpolyfam -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 7:01:36 AM)


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ORIGINAL: myotherself

Late to the party again...sigh...

but anyway, I claim first prize as the one and only sub-type on here who read the OP's tome from beginning to end - yay me! Although my eyes did start to bleed halfway through.

I nearly applied for the job, but sadly I had a fundamental disagreement with the philosophies therein. This 'god' thing and 'karmic debt' are very nice ideas...but nah, not for this worker bunny.

Belief in god is fine, if you have it. It seems to make a lot of believers very happy. And to them - rock on! [:)]

I think mostly it was the concept of karmic debt that derailed my enthusiasm. I spent a long, tricky few hours this weekend sorting out my debts, and prioritising payback. Top of the list is my mortgage lender, and sadly at the bottom is karma. Were I to declare bankruptcy it's likely that karma would be lucky to get 1p in the pound.

Ah well, such is life. [:(]

So I decided to focus my professional writing and editing skills on repaying my actual, financial debt. That way I can pay off my debtors, and hopefully hire a couple of purty ladies with significant bewbage to keep this fluffy bunny warm and snuggly for a loooong time to come...[:D]

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Late to the party again...sigh... but anyway, I claim first prize as the one and only sub-type on here who read the OP's tome from beginning to end - yay me! Although my eyes did start to bleed halfway through. I nearly applied for the job, but sadly I had a fundamental disagreement with the philosophies therein. This 'god' thing and 'karmic debt' are very nice ideas...but nah, not for this worker bunny. Belief in god is fine, if you have it. It seems to make a lot of believers very happy. And to them - rock on! I think mostly it was the concept of karmic debt that derailed my enthusiasm. I spent a long, tricky few hours this weekend sorting out my debts, and prioritising payback. Top of the list is my mortgage lender, and sadly at the bottom is karma. Were I to declare bankruptcy it's likely that karma would be lucky to get 1p in the pound. Ah well, such is life. So I decided to focus my professional writing and editing skills on repaying my actual, financial debt. That way I can pay off my debtors, and hopefully hire a couple of purty ladies with significant bewbage to keep this fluffy bunny warm and snuggly for a loooong time to come...


We appreciate you reading our tome all the way through.

As far as the debts, even if you don't come to work for US, maybe we can help. We may have a way to pay off your debts and give you some money besides. Contact US if you are interested.

SR&MC




sirrandpolyfam -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 7:13:17 AM)


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ORIGINAL: WinsomeDefiance

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ORIGINAL: sirrandpolyfam
Well we thought we would raise the level of discourse. It didn't seem enough to just say hi.

SR&MC
 

I wouldn't worry too much about raising the level of discourse.  I'm sure an expert in Druidism, Kabbalah, Taoism, Martial Arts, Tai Chi, Astronomy, Astrology, Philosophy and Physics (among everything else,) won't have much trouble finding topics to discuss with others here.



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I wouldn't worry too much about raising the level of discourse.  I'm sure an expert in Druidism, Kabbalah, Taoism, Martial Arts, Tai Chi, Astronomy, Astrology, Philosophy and Physics (among everything else,) won't have much trouble finding topics to discuss with others here.


Well that is our purpose for coming on to the boards. Do you know any thing about those things or have any interest in them at all?




sirrandpolyfam -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 7:16:10 AM)


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ORIGINAL: WyldHrt

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we do know that DNA is passed on through generations and the sins of the father/mother (any STD) mutates the line.

Wow... just, wow.
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Since all traumas are stored in the DNA then we are bound to experience some echoes of ours and our ancestors passed sins.

Ok, I tried.... LMFAO!
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If that is a truism we can all believe then the rest is only semantics.

Trust me, it SO isn't a 'truism' we all believe!






So you don't believe that DNA is a holographic picture of the lives your ancestors lived?

SR&MC




WinsomeDefiance -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 7:30:08 AM)

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ORIGINAL: sirrandpolyfam
Well that is our purpose for coming on to the boards. Do you know any thing about those things or have any interest in them at all?


Well, I was actually rather moved when I read the Tao Te Ching.  I found it quite poetic and thought provoking at the time. 

Most of the Kaballah was beyond my ability to grasp, but the few things I did grasp were quite fascinating.  I especially found of interest the reference to the story of Adam and Eve being (more or less) a Primer.  Bascially, the symbol for Adam was something like an A and the symbol for Eve was the A with the 'rib' removed.  In other words a V.   Which was theorized is basis for the story of Eve being created by removing the rib from Adam. 

I found Druidism pretty interesting, even the many bastardized and villainized versions of it. 

Passed a few philosophy courses, failed miserably at physics, enjoyed Karate Kid when I was a kid and dabbled in Astrology.  My knowledge of Astronomy basically encompasses my ability to find the big dipper. 

For the most part, I've read enough to know better than to ever...ever DREAM of calling myself an expert in any of it.  To be honest, I find it rather idiotic to claim to be an expert at everything. 





sirrandpolyfam -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 7:30:33 AM)


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ORIGINAL: OrpheusAgonistes

The OP is kind of beautiful, in its own way.  It reads like Philip K. Dick, minus the wit, charm, and insight.  It's as if VALIS has been rewritten by a profoundly autistic teenager from Burma who learned English by reading Scientology pamphlets and Magic the Gathering discussion boards.

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The OP is kind of beautiful, in its own way.  It reads like Philip K. Dick, minus the wit, charm, and insight.  It's as if VALIS has been rewritten by a profoundly autistic teenager from Burma who learned English by reading Scientology pamphlets and Magic the Gathering discussion boards.


Thank you for at least talking about the subject.
SR&MC




leadership527 -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 7:32:11 AM)

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ORIGINAL: zephyroftheNorth
Spinal tap play? Please tell me you are either joking or referring to the band. *turns green*
No, I am not joking... Genuine thread here on collarme. I don't know... maybe 1.5-2 years ago?




RedMagic1 -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 7:34:42 AM)

The "lumber puncture" thread![:D][:D][:D][:D][:D][:D][:D]

http://www.collarchat.com/m_1898267/mpage_1/tm.htm




leadership527 -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 7:40:02 AM)

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ORIGINAL: RedMagic1
The "lumber puncture" thread![:D][:D][:D][:D][:D][:D][:D]
http://www.collarchat.com/m_1898267/mpage_1/tm.htm

ROFL - Thanks Red.

Now, the 64 million dollar question. Is it more dangerous to do lumbar punctures drunken on the deck of a sailboat in a storm or go visit the OP's slave farm? I'm trying to do my RACK scoring on this but I can't quite pin down the risk factor.




Jeffff -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:08:24 AM)

Awww, bella, what have you done now?


You need mentoring!




sirrandpolyfam -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:09:37 AM)


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ORIGINAL: lally2

to suggest that all slaves are here to live as worker ants for their immediate community with no other ambition in their life other than to serve their Master and redeem their karmic debt is going to put people off.

you suggest, i think that unless a slave is this way wired she is just a wannabee, and thats wrong too.

im not saying that theyre not out there but i would say that youre narrowing youre field by promoting youre world view into this.

personally, as a slave type i am certainly wired to help my partner achieve all that he wishes to achieve but i also have ambitions of my own that are of equal importance to him and to me.

even if prospective subs dont grasp what youre saying to them about all of this, ill bet there have been a few who have just moved right along because ultimately most people have their own ambitions and their own purpose and their own path and giving all of that up to be in a poly relationship, working for the soul purpose of paying some karmic debt rather than actually just doing this for their Master and being appreciated and valued for that (which basically is where a slave comes from - and you should know that if youve had all of this experience) would feel all a bit wonky.

i dont wish to submit to my karmic debt, i wish to submit to my Master and by answering to my own path and being honest to myself i will endeavour to leave this life with not too much debt attached. 

i see where youre coming from i really do - but i think youre packaging it all wrong and thats why youre not getting the responses you want.  its not that youre coming up against wannabes, youre scaring them off with all youre karmic debt, god and serving the ultimate purpose (music).  i would suggest politely that you first find youreself a suitable candidate and consider their needs, ambitions and life goal and see how that might fit in with youre requirements.

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to suggest that all slaves are here to live as worker ants for their immediate community with no other ambition in their life other than to serve their Master and redeem their karmic debt is going to put people off. you suggest, i think that unless a slave is this way wired she is just a wannabee, and thats wrong too. im not saying that theyre not out there but i would say that youre narrowing youre field by promoting youre world view into this. personally, as a slave type i am certainly wired to help my partner achieve all that he wishes to achieve but i also have ambitions of my own that are of equal importance to him and to me. even if prospective subs dont grasp what youre saying to them about all of this, ill bet there have been a few who have just moved right along because ultimately most people have their own ambitions and their own purpose and their own path and giving all of that up to be in a poly relationship, working for the soul purpose of paying some karmic debt rather than actually just doing this for their Master and being appreciated and valued for that (which basically is where a slave comes from - and you should know that if youve had all of this experience) would feel all a bit wonky. i dont wish to submit to my karmic debt, i wish to submit to my Master and by answering to my own path and being honest to myself i will endeavour to leave this life with not too much debt attached.  i see where youre coming from i really do - but i think youre packaging it all wrong and thats why youre not getting the responses you want.  its not that youre coming up against wannabes, youre scaring them off with all youre karmic debt, god and serving the ultimate purpose (music).  i would suggest politely that you first find youreself a suitable candidate and consider their needs, ambitions and life goal and see how that might fit in with youre requirements.


to suggest that all slaves are here to live as worker ants for their immediate community with no other ambition in their life other than to serve their Master and redeem their karmic debt is going to put people off.

It may but is it wrong? Is not all life built around the quest for balance?

you suggest, i think that unless a slave is this way wired she is just a wannabee, and thats wrong too.

"That is not what we meant to suggest. If a slave does not consider it’s true motives for becoming some ones chattel then they are only on a lark and there fore a true slave wannabe."

im not saying that theyre not out there but i would say that youre narrowing youre field by promoting youre world view into this.

"Well our needs are specific and we hope to find artist slaves who like Van Gogh need a strict mentor and protector. Who will provide them with a work environment that they can flourish in as well as keep them on a sexual high. The only cost to them would be absolute obedience."

personally, as a slave type i am certainly wired to help my partner achieve all that he wishes to achieve but i also have ambitions of my own that are of equal importance to him and to me.

"Which are? Do they help the US that is your relationship or do they take away from it?"

even if prospective subs dont grasp what youre saying to them about all of this, ill bet there have been a few who have just moved right along because ultimately most people have their own ambitions and their own purpose and their own path and giving all of that up to be in a poly relationship, working for the soul purpose of paying some karmic debt rather than actually just doing this for their Master and being appreciated and valued for that (which basically is where a slave comes from - and you should know that if youve had all of this experience) would feel all a bit wonky.

"It was not our purpose to suggest that their passions had no merit but that if their passions were similar to ours and they are having trouble focusing their energy to accomplish anything being our slave is one course of action. Creating beautiful works of art as shown in time immemorial requires an artist enclave, Leonardo Da Vinci and Andy Warhol places to name a few."

i dont wish to submit to my karmic debt, i wish to submit to my Master and by answering to my own path and being honest to myself i will endeavour to leave this life with not too much debt attached.

"That is what we are saying. Being true to your Master by answering to your own path and being honest to yourself is your Divine Destiny and therefore Karmic Debt free if accomplished."

i see where youre coming from i really do - but i think youre packaging it all wrong and thats why youre not getting the responses you want. its not that youre coming up against wannabes, youre scaring them off with all youre karmic debt, god and serving the ultimate purpose (music). i would suggest politely that you first find youreself a suitable candidate and consider their needs, ambitions and life goal and see how that might fit in with youre requirements.

"We do that in our intro letter which this tome was not it but a way to introduce ourselves again to a community we have participated in for 6 years."




VaguelyCurious -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:16:22 AM)

I'm avoiding revision. This is now nearly 1000 words shorter, and I've fixed most of the (many many many many) grammatical and structural errors (still catching some now, though-don't judge me for missing them :P). I left most of the bogus philosophy and biology in, but at least it is now grammatically correct hooey.




We have a need for special skills: proof reading and music composition. Do you have either of these skills? We have met and trained many slaves, but we have not had any that came to us with these abilities.

Every slave that we send an intro letter to is special. They are a beautiful woman/man whose profile says they want a Master/Mistress. They are a loyal, obedient, loving and caring slave who hates fakes. We send them an intro letter which is designed to find out what kind of slave they will make.

***
When we consider a slave, one of our first tests is this intro letter, which we expect you to read. Those that read it show us two things:

1. they are intelligent and thoughtful potential slaves who want to know all they can
about us and
2. they will read our writing. [ed: and god fucking help them for trying. I know fifteen year olds with a better understanding of sentence structure than this, and they aren't claiming to be script writers...]

By the time we get to the second letter - our "slave questionnaire" - we are able to weed out most of the fakes; they don’t want to waste time answering questions. We do not tolerate attempts to get our email address without filling in the questionnaire.

***

To those wishing to enter a life of submission but worried about surrendering their personality or ability to function in the real world with out orders from a Master:

You get up in the morning, pee, wash your face, brush your hair, brush your teeth, dress, eat breakfast, travel to work/school etc, work all day, come home, eat watch TV, have sex if you are lucky, go to sleep, and then do it all over again the next day. Most people live this life of quiet desperation.

We believe this is because your parents taught you that life is hard and that the only way out is to die. They taught you this because it is what their parents taught them. They were not allowed to fulfil their dreams, so why should they let you?

Perhaps you are one of the lucky ones: you haven’t been beaten down and you know you have a passion, but you have no idea who to tell or what to do about it. That is why you find a mentor: a Master/Mistress to teach you how to fulfil your desire and maybe your Divine Destiny.

***

As your Master and Mistress we will train you to shed your inhibitions. You will make our passions your passions and at the same time we will find your passions and let them soar. We want to find the hidden talents that god gave you and make them shine.

We want to train you with a Zen mindset that says you can accomplish anything you set your mind too and that you can do anything we tell you to do perfectly every time. If you have the perfect mindset you can achieve any thing even great things.

We are also willing to teach slave skills to those who are willing to learn. After all we are looking for creative worker slaves as well as sex slaves. Are you willing to be a worker bee as well as a slut puppy? It is hard to keep a good proof reader on the verge of cumming without them missing typos, but we reward good work with continuous extreme orgasms until they pass out.

***

Sometimes during slave training the hardest part is learning to find enjoyment in doing something you don’t enjoy doing, just because it pleases your Master/Mistress. We will train you to do that.

Just because a task we give you to do is outside your ability doesn't mean you can't or shouldn't do it. It's time for growth. We don’t believe in “I can’t.” To us “I can’t” is NEVER true. Every “I can’t” is easily turned into an “I can”, which is the mindset we will teach you. This goes for “I don’t know” as well.

Did you think being our slave was going to be easy? Did you think we weren't going to be pushing you to grow in new directions? As a slave you don't get to stay in your little comfy zone. Even we regularly jump out of our own comfort zone. We are fearless and we will demand that you be the same. [ed: the next two sentences said exactly the same thing as this one in slightly different wordings. Script writers? Nah.]

Telling us "no" is not tolerated. No matter what project we are working on there will be someone that will tell us “no.” That never stops us; we treat it as a speed bump in the road to a “yes.” If one path leads to a dead end we will find another. As a trained submissive or slave the word “no” is removed from your vocabulary. You will also be trained not to take no from anyone else.

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If you were our slave what would your duties involve?

If you were our night sex slave these would be your duties:

You would get us ready for bed with a sex romp nightcap (our reward for working all day). You would sleep either between our legs or on the floor, chained beside our bed.

We would awake the next day with you between our legs, lovingly licking and sucking us awake and until we climaxed. You would take all our elixirs and swallow them as your reward for a job well done.

Then you would arise, help us shower (being sure we were very clean all over), help us dress, and gives us kisses to start the day.

You would then hand us off to the domestic slaves, who would feed us. The creative slaves would join us in our home office after breakfast to work. We would all work in our office nude, or dressed if on location. You would help the domestic slaves clean the house and prepare lunch/dinner.

Every so often we would have a scene where you would be tied up and beaten for our or our guest amusement. Every hole would be used, and you would be well fucked and abused.

As you can see you would give up nothing but a vanilla routine.

***

Many potential slaves do not understand the phrase "the Muse is in the room”; they become frustrated when we work through a hot streak. The Muse is the goddess or the power regarded as inspiration for poets, artists, thinkers, and the like. Some slaves have become our muses.

We have addressed this frustration by dictating to our creative slaves to keep them involved with the process. We have even put them in a 69 position while they take dictation, which is a definite multi-tasking challenge for slave and Master/Mistress alike - most of the time the Muse is not amused and leaves the building.

If the creative slave works hard and we finish before our deadlines then we will play. Many days are days of sex, sex, sex...

Then when we get the green light to continue with our script/book/movie/project, we go back to work with a vengeance.

Don’t get us wrong: we have very short play breaks all day long; some slaves even have a pussy or dick in their mouth all day, for our life is "eat when hungry, piss and poop when full, sleep when tired, fuck when horny and create all the time."

***

We believe in Divine Destiny and Karmic Debt. This is what the terms mean to us:

Our Divine Destiny dictates our passions and our path. We are designed to learn skills, train muscles to react before we think about it, to be at the right street corner, at the right time, to save the damsel in distress before she absent-mindedly walks into the traffic.

God says you have a choice: you can fulfil your Divine Destiny now or you can exercise free will and postpone it, thus incurring Karmic Debt, which you will have to pay in subsequent life times. You will always fulfil your Divine Destiny - if not in this lifetime then in another.

Karmic Debt is the idea that you must pay for the things you did in past lives that postponed your Divine Destiny, centered instead on your Free Will. The energy that you put out there today and the energy your relatives put out there in the past have relatively similar energy signatures and will return to you. This signature has been encoded in you DNA. This ancestral energy has and will follow you into this life and the next.

A life filled with Karmic Debt which has a rhythm that is set by your inherited DNA can be a life of adventure or a Casper Milquetoast existence [ed: I'm assuming the words 'Casper milk toast' mean something to Americans] [ed: I've just been told what it means, and how it is actually spelt, and have corrected it]. This Karmic Debt is what dictates how you react to certain stimuli in this life: the partners you have, the jobs you hold, the values you live by and passions that drive you.

This DNA dictates the way you go about the business of fulfilling your Divine Destiny, or the selfish way you exercise your Free Will. It makes up the life you live and shapes the DNA you will hand down to the next generation.

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DNA is a ticking clock and a map that tells your body and each cell in the body its deficiencies, strengths and weaknesses. It tells each cell how long it has to live. It is estimated that every cell in the body is replaced every 6 months; every 6 months you are a new person.

Old age affects the replacement of cells; at some point in time a cell can no longer be reborn. After enough cells can’t be reborn we die. All of this information is in your DNA, the road map of your life.

What variable could change that? The Yogis change their DNA by transcendental meditation. It is said that Jesus used Transmutation - the ability to take your body apart and merge with the cosmos, then recombine your body molecules, becoming stronger and more aware than before.

The question is: will death and reincarnation allow you to fulfil your Divine Destiny? Will you be in the right place at the right time to save the girl this lifetime?

If this is how Karma works (and since Master is always right I presume that it is true) then we are meant to be Master and Mistress by virtue of our DNA, and you are meant to be a slave by virtue of yours.

***

If you think this is your Divine Destiny what are you waiting for?

Obedience is bliss for the ones who serve willingly.

Sir Rand & Mistress Carol




WinsomeDefiance -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:23:38 AM)

DAMN VC, you have taken 'anal'to a whole new level! [:D]




sirrandpolyfam -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:25:37 AM)


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ORIGINAL: WinsomeDefiance

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ORIGINAL: sirrandpolyfam
Well that is our purpose for coming on to the boards. Do you know any thing about those things or have any interest in them at all?


Well, I was actually rather moved when I read the Tao Te Ching.  I found it quite poetic and thought provoking at the time. 

Most of the Kaballah was beyond my ability to grasp, but the few things I did grasp were quite fascinating.  I especially found of interest the reference to the story of Adam and Eve being (more or less) a Primer.  Bascially, the symbol for Adam was something like an A and the symbol for Eve was the A with the 'rib' removed.  In other words a V.   Which was theorized is basis for the story of Eve being created by removing the rib from Adam. 

I found Druidism pretty interesting, even the many bastardized and villainized versions of it. 

Passed a few philosophy courses, failed miserably at physics, enjoyed Karate Kid when I was a kid and dabbled in Astrology.  My knowledge of Astronomy basically encompasses my ability to find the big dipper. 

For the most part, I've read enough to know better than to ever...ever DREAM of calling myself an expert in any of it.  To be honest, I find it rather idiotic to claim to be an expert at everything. 



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Well, I was actually rather moved when I read the Tao Te Ching.  I found it quite poetic and thought provoking at the time.  Most of the Kaballah was beyond my ability to grasp, but the few things I did grasp were quite fascinating.  I especially found of interest the reference to the story of Adam and Eve being (more or less) a Primer.  Bascially, the symbol for Adam was something like an A and the symbol for Eve was the A with the 'rib' removed.  In other words a V.   Which was theorized is basis for the story of Eve being created by removing the rib from Adam.  I found Druidism pretty interesting, even the many bastardized and villainized versions of it.  Passed a few philosophy courses, failed miserably at physics, enjoyed Karate Kid when I was a kid and dabbled in Astrology.  My knowledge of Astronomy basically encompasses my ability to find the big dipper.  For the most part, I've read enough to know better than to ever...ever DREAM of calling myself an expert in any of it.  To be honest, I find it rather idiotic to claim to be an expert at everything. 


“hmm you have seemed to grasped the essence of them all. As far as expert in all we should change that. It just seemed to be misleading to say we were nothing more then a journeymen apprentice on those subjects when Master spent many years becoming more then just a little proficient at them. I suppose we could say we were students of those subjects but that seems lacking some how also.”

SR&MC




VaguelyCurious -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:33:43 AM)

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ORIGINAL: WinsomeDefiance

DAMN VC, you have taken 'anal'to a whole new level! [:D]


Yeah, but I made an atrocious thing more readable-I feel productive.




sirrandpolyfam -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:38:08 AM)

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ORIGINAL: VaguelyCurious

I'm avoiding revision. This is now nearly 1000 words shorter, and I've fixed most of the (many many many many) grammatical and structural errors. I left most of the bogus philosophy and biology in, but at least it is now grammatically correct hooey.

(trimmed for length)


Thank you we will take your revisions to heart.

SR&MC


(modedit to remove multipage quote - M21)




whipmaker7 -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:44:36 AM)

Sounds like having faith just to cover your ass... a lousy reason to believe in something!
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ORIGINAL: sirrandpolyfam



As Pascal said "There is no known way to prove the the existence of God but if he does exist you damn well better have believed in him."

SR&MC






ishyB -> RE: Is slavery your Divine Destiny (5/11/2010 8:53:13 AM)

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ORIGINAL: VaguelyCurious

I'm avoiding revision. This is now nearly 1000 words shorter, and I've fixed most of the (many many many many) grammatical and structural errors. I left most of the bogus philosophy and biology in, but at least it is now grammatically correct hooey.


VaguelyCurious, you have just proven that they ARE right about one thing... they DO desperately need a proof reader/editor... [:D]




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