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Adice on my profile pls! - 5/14/2010 11:58:45 AM

SweetNika

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I have rewritten my profile and would love some constructive criticizime on it please.

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RE: Adice on my profile pls! - 5/14/2010 12:23:48 PM

VirginPotty

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It's fine, Nika but you might want to remove the journal entries that include your move w/NM.

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RE: Adice on my profile pls! - 5/14/2010 12:36:28 PM

SweetNika

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I didn't even think about that, i may just update my journal instead of deleting the enteries.

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RE: Adice on my profile pls! - 5/14/2010 12:43:14 PM

pegbundy

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I couldn't find anything to criticize. Sorry I'm no help.

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RE: Adice on my profile pls! - 5/14/2010 12:49:40 PM

VirginPotty

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quote:

ORIGINAL: SweetNika

I didn't even think about that, i may just update my journal instead of deleting the enteries.

Start fresh....delete anything that mentions him including the dates.
Your new life begins TODAY! Start a fresh entry!

< Message edited by VirginPotty -- 5/14/2010 12:50:18 PM >

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RE: Adice on my profile pls! - 5/14/2010 12:54:30 PM

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Nah, leave em up there. Let people see what kind of person you are.

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RE: Adice on my profile pls! - 5/14/2010 1:18:45 PM

VaguelyCurious

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It's a good profile-clear and descriptive.

There are a couple of minor (teeeeeny tiny really not that important) grammatical errors, mainly to do with comma placement-not worth listing them on the forums, but if you want a fix memo me.

VC the grammar fanatic

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