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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/24/2011 9:34:34 AM

Delilya

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Thank you Arieno, and yes, I mean every word.

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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/24/2011 3:41:26 PM

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Hello Delilya,

I like the first paragraph! It grabs my attention. It's the sort of thing that I was looking for and believe that I have found.

I think that the second paragraph should be about what you are looking for in a man. If your looking for 'real time' or a 'long term' relationship get that out right away. Eighteen to ninety nine or eighteen to nineteen? Four-ten to seven-eleven or six-two to six-three? Be specific where you need to be. If he has to have green eyes then say so.

Use the rest of what you have written to sell Sell SELL!... Gather all of the rest of your profile and tell this guy that YOU are a "Trustworthy Mistress" who will "Explore your (his) limits," and "Expand your horizons," and "Show you need that you didn't know that you had!" (gulp)

What you've written is beautiful! I think that if you make it more about you and me ("me" being the reader) it will work just fine.

Well, that's my opinion,

Respectfully,
Mike
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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/25/2011 2:03:57 AM

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Thank you so much Mike, not only for your kind words, but your suggestions. I am trying to work it all out. I appreciate your taking time to help!

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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/25/2011 6:31:32 AM

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I like the changes you made. I think it shows a little more of you, which comes across very well.

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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/25/2011 1:32:27 PM

Arieno

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quote:

Thank you Arieno, and yes, I mean every word. [/quote

I know you are receiving good advice from people with far greater time and experience on Collar Me then I, yet I think it important that you do not lose sight of the fact the dominant is but a singly facet of many faceted woman and the emphasis should be on you as a woman with all the strength weaknesses wants needs and desires of any other woman.

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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/26/2011 10:26:20 AM

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Your profile says, "I am a sub who does not know it yet" and that is OK, by the way. We guys can see it and don't mind what you call yourself. Pretty smile. Honest.

Lose the nature scenes or undress and do the peek-a-boo scene nude in heels using the trees as cover. Very HOT, right? First thing you do is find a photographer locally you can trust from references in the local scene or lifestyle club or munch.

Or not, suit yourself.

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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/26/2011 12:55:20 PM

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Thanks again everyone for the advice and suggestions. Appreciated!

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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/26/2011 12:59:36 PM

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quote:

ORIGINAL: Arturas

Your profile says, "I am a sub who does not know it yet" and that is OK, by the way. We guys can see it and don't mind what you call yourself. Pretty smile. Honest.

Lose the nature scenes or undress and do the peek-a-boo scene nude in heels using the trees as cover. Very HOT, right? First thing you do is find a photographer locally you can trust from references in the local scene or lifestyle club or munch.

Or not, suit yourself.

Seriously?

< Message edited by BonesFromAsh -- 3/26/2011 1:00:58 PM >

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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/26/2011 4:24:20 PM

Delilya

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quote:

ORIGINAL: Arturas

Your profile says, "I am a sub who does not know it yet" and that is OK, by the way. We guys can see it and don't mind what you call yourself. Pretty smile. Honest.

Lose the nature scenes or undress and do the peek-a-boo scene nude in heels using the trees as cover. Very HOT, right? First thing you do is find a photographer locally you can trust from references in the local scene or lifestyle club or munch.

Or not, suit yourself.

I keep trying to answer this post but I swear, I find the first line so hysterical, I'm having trouble getting past it.

I appreciate what you have to say about the photos. The nature scenes are necessary to me because I am looking for someone like me. He will have to have the same respect for Mother Earth and all living creatures as I do. Hmmmm, need to add that to my profile, don't I?

Thank you for your input and suggestions.

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RE: Profile Advice Please - 3/26/2011 4:39:43 PM

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*Wll thank goodness a twe master came and save you from yourself*
I always think "Unoriginal Dork" When I see posts like the above. M

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