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ashjor911 -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 10:31:22 AM)

Welcome To CM




MistressDarkArt -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 10:51:49 AM)

Welcome, Jim. You seem to have taken the high road, good for you.

Having not seen your original profile, based on what others have commented on my guess is you've greatly improved your odds with your new revision. There are now only nice-looking 'nilla pictures of yourself, 'hello, I'm Master Jim', and some rather sparse 'nilla interests listed. This will help, but many will still want to know: besides the lifestyle, what are you all about? What goes on behind those eyes? Re-writing your narrative is a great opportunity to solidify to yourself who you are, and a good koan to put up to the universe.

Good luck in your search.

PS: I'm turned off by lack of proper spelling, grammar and punctuation as are many people. There's quite a bit of that in your post here, so watch for those squiggly red lines while typing and if you need some help with punctuation, give a shout. I'd be happy to help.





zephyroftheNorth -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 11:16:15 AM)

I think we scared him MDA, his profile text shrank. [8D]. Jim, I hope you write more in your profile. As it is, I don't think you really improved your chances of having your messages answered.

Zeph aka #7




lizi -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 11:22:37 AM)

I have to echo MistressDarkArt and say good on you for the revisions. In particular, just having the pictures of you up is a vast improvement. I find you quite yummy to gaze upon.

I look forward to seeing what else you come up with. You might want to try looking around at other profiles to get a sense of what to put in yours. As far as writing emails goes....I've remembered an old thread that pops up from time to time that is just great and is on that particular subject. http://www.collarchat.com/m_1717756/mpage_1/key_/tm.htm#1717756

Maybe if you try some of the things in that thread you'll get a better return rate on your emails. Good luck!




hangemhigh1953 -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 11:24:02 AM)

In my limited experience, I have found that having a mostly vanilla profile helps quite a bit. People don't want to meet Master Jim until they know Jim first.




zephyroftheNorth -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 11:27:55 AM)

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ORIGINAL: hangemhigh1953

In my limited experience, I have found that having a mostly vanilla profile helps quite a bit. People don't want to meet Master Jim until they know Jim first.


QFT and hallelujah praise the lord! This is exactly it, I don't want to meet Master_____ or his cock pix (not saying this is you, Jim) before I meet the 'nilla guy.

I for one am impressed that you are listening to our advice. Deleting the pix and most of the text is a good start. Now build on it and tell us about YOU.

ETA: By the way, love the pic you have up. There is something very sexy about that touch of a smile combined with that long haired biker type. Ah if only you weren't so far I'm intrigued now




ChatteParfaitt -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 12:14:45 PM)

Hey chickie and I have plans to hook up in a couple weeks.

We can verify each other's twueness.

Wooooooooooo hooooo!




zephyroftheNorth -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 12:29:24 PM)

Nuh-uh the twooness rules state that at least three people are needed for verification. Otherwise the two could have agreed to vouch for each other. I'm afraid that you girls are going to have to come here so I can verify that you are both real.




SirLangsdorff -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 12:50:00 PM)

After reading the comments here, I'm not certain I want to read your profile. I like learning from others mistakes first and if all else fails, then make the same one for myself. Anyway,, welcome to CM for what it's worth and hopefully you get a better percentage of responses to your emails. 




DarkSteven -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 12:59:17 PM)

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ORIGINAL: zephyroftheNorth

Nuh-uh the twooness rules state that at least three people are needed for verification. Otherwise the two could have agreed to vouch for each other. I'm afraid that you girls are going to have to come here so I can verify that you are both real.


I got me a camera that all three of you can verify the realness of while yer at it.




zephyroftheNorth -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 1:03:44 PM)

Yeah you'd like that wouldn't you Stevie. Course you didn't specify so the only pic you would get would be one of us fully clothed with our arms around each other.




ChatteParfaitt -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 1:21:34 PM)

quote:

ORIGINAL: zephyroftheNorth

Nuh-uh the twooness rules state that at least three people are needed for verification. Otherwise the two could have agreed to vouch for each other. I'm afraid that you girls are going to have to come here so I can verify that you are both real.


Well my dom will be there and there are plans for Mummyman to attend as well.

A twueness verification BBQ !!

If course, chickie has already been verified. So she will be the verfirer.

Uh huh.








zephyroftheNorth -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 1:23:10 PM)

Well.....SHIT! So much for getting together with you guys you don't need me now do you. ~sadest face EVAH~




0ldhen -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 4:28:54 PM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: ChatteParfaitt

Hey chickie and I have plans to hook up in a couple weeks.

We can verify each other's twueness.

Wooooooooooo hooooo!




I'll show you mine if you'll show me yours.........weg!




BurntKitty -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 4:51:26 PM)

Chiming back in- awesome re-write![sm=banana.gif]

If I was single, I'd be interested.




poise -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 5:24:43 PM)

And he cooks! Who woulda' known? [image]http://users.igl.net/lovely1/hubba1.gif[/image]
MasterdeWolf, I really do hope these changes lead to a more enjoyable experience for you here.
Please keep us posted. [:D]




risktaker9 -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 6:00:20 PM)

Didn't see the original, but I really like what you've got there now. Hubba hubba. Go forth and net some wimmens  [:)]  I'd totally respond to you if you wrote me because I like the positive profile - it really gives me a sense of you. I find it totally hot when a guy doesn't lead with sex and kink, but saves that stuff for after getting to know me. So tired of guys writing me and asking me sexual questions right off the bat or having a profile full of nothing but that. You're way ahead of the game as far as I'm concerned and nice to look at too.




Masterdewolf -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 6:07:39 PM)

well thankyou all for the help and esp a big thankyou to zephyroftheNorth
for all the help , and yes i will keep you posted on what happens

Jim




sexyred1 -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 6:09:36 PM)

Way better profile; and yes, you are hot. :)




Politesub53 -> RE: whats going on ?? (8/27/2011 6:17:36 PM)


quote:

ORIGINAL: MistressDarkArt


PS: I'm turned off by lack of proper spelling, grammar and punctuation as are many people. There's quite a bit of that in your post here, so watch for those squiggly red lines while typing and if you need some help with punctuation, give a shout. I'd be happy to help.





Sheesh....it`s GRAMMER, whats wrong with you people............ [end / English humour (with a U) ]
[;)]




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