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For your entertainment again - 5/23/2006 7:34:18 PM

understud

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once more it seem I've walked into a pit of gloom. I would hope my scribbling offend no one; and pray that some might even find it at the least entertaining for a brief moment. So again into the breach; an original poem for your amusement.

In Time

Shadows darken over sunset hills
Empty trails are quiet en still

Heat of day cooled in evening tides
I bid farewell my love; ti's my time to die

To this end I was born
of love and passion ner forsworn

Yet thee my love; I can love no more
I am parted by deaths dark door

The world I knew; I bid thee peace
Now close my eyes in eternal sleep

To slumber here within these hills
Till all creation lies quiet en still...

most humbly offered for you pleasure

always respectful; respectfully submitted

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RE: For your entertainment again - 5/23/2006 10:08:22 PM

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that was ever good do you have any more

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RE: For your entertainment again - 5/23/2006 10:27:37 PM

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Hey, I used to be good at the depressing poetry thing too...for your general amusement, written 09/12/1986...damn, I was a bad poet <g>

BURN

CIGARETTES BURN
MY EMPTY THROAT
SKIN DRY
EYES OPAQUE
I THINK I AM DYING
FEAR
YOU LIE IN BED
ASLEEP
DREAMS OF YOUR LOVER
THERE ARE NO ANSWERS
NO LIFE IN HERE
I LOOK OUTWARDS
BUT CAN'T SEE IN
I TOUCH GOD
AND HE BURNS
I CRY
AND TURN AWAY
IN YOUR SLEEP
YOU START
AND REACH FOR HIM
I GET OUT OF THE CHAIR
ICED WINDOW
WALK TO THE BATHROOM
NO WAY OUT
IN FOR GOOD
I PUT OUT MY CIGARETTE
WATCH MY WRISTS
BLEED
TO THE FLOOR
I LOVE
YOU.

Yes, I wrote all in caps then...damn, I'm glad I'm no longer twenty...<smile>

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RE: For your entertainment again - 5/24/2006 4:53:32 AM

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Hi CERCKL; always wanted to talk to you. simply love the avatar lol. thanks for your poem, but was too light hearted for my mood i fear....I only wish i was twenty, but i did give up smoking. Hey do you thing god smokes? now there is a question lol again tks ... see you on the boards don't you know.....and i don't think you were a bad poet at all. you wrote what you felt...no good or bad to it.

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RE: For your entertainment again - 5/24/2006 4:58:56 AM

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Hello MasterMoody; thanks for the complement, and i'm honored you enjoyed the versw...Unfortunately i do have more, god so many more, most arent as cheerful lol...well take care sir look forward to reading your post be well have fun

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