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ccc3333 -> Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:07:01 PM)
Anyone have any thoughts or constructive criticism's for my profile? Just wondering. Thanks in advance C

Level -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:17:23 PM)
It shouldn't be done in invisible ink?

TieMeInKnottss -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:21:45 PM)
You may want o be a little more descriptive on what you want... I understand not wanting to put it all out there but you need to bait the hook.. My "thing" today is what will you provide her (I have a question posted on ask a master :) because I have become curious)

TheLilSquaw -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:23:00 PM)
If you have tons of pictures, why not post one that isn't blurry? How do you know the road to a strangers ultimate please? IMO your profile reads like a do me dom. It only talks about play, which will turn a lot of subs/slaves off. Typically women want to see something about YOU the man. They want to know that you have some common ground outside the bedroom. What do you enjoy outside of kink? It's not about listing the world as you put it.

Level -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:26:36 PM)
Hmm. When I click on their name, nothing comes up.

ccc3333 -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:26:45 PM)
-- tie me, working onit. =lilsquaw what is a do me dom? So i should talk a little bit more about the pain i can inflict? quote: ORIGINAL: TheLilSquaw If you have tons of pictures, why not post one that isn't blurry? How do you know the road to a strangers ultimate please? IMO your profile reads like a do me dom. It only talks about play, which will turn a lot of subs/slaves off. Typically women want to see something about YOU the man. They want to know that you have some common ground outside the bedroom. What do you enjoy outside of kink? It's not about listing the world as you put it.

OhRose -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:27:10 PM)
1) Maybe try uploading a photo that wasn't taken using a trout. 2) Add something about your hobbies, interests outside of all your sexual prowess.

ccc3333 -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:28:03 PM)
On the photo, I was trying different photo's and now i can't get to uploading more... so the site is malfunctioning.. Yes i am adding hobbies and such aswe speak :) quote: ORIGINAL: OhRose 1) Maybe try uploading a photo that wasn't taken with using a trout. 2) Add something about your hobbies, interests outside of all your sexual prowess.

TheLilSquaw -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:29:43 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: ccc3333 -- tie me, working onit. =lilsquaw what is a do me dom? So i should talk a little bit more about the pain i can inflict? do me dom is a dom who is all about HIM and his kink... It's about him getting off. I think you should talk more about YOU. The man, not the kink not the dom. What do you enjoy outside of kink. This is someone's 1st impression of you.

ccc3333 -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:33:18 PM)
Thank you, will have it done in about 20 min . quote: ORIGINAL: TheLilSquaw quote: ORIGINAL: ccc3333 -- tie me, working onit. =lilsquaw what is a do me dom? So i should talk a little bit more about the pain i can inflict? do me dom is a dom who is all about HIM and his kink... It's about him getting off. I think you should talk more about YOU. The man, not the kink not the dom. What do you enjoy outside of kink. This is someone's 1st impression of you.

ccc3333 -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:37:13 PM)
how about now?

poise -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:44:21 PM)
I like the updated list of pictures, especially the ..... Hey! Where did it go!? Darn it, you must be changing them all out as I type this. No fair! I like the line question is will you let me drive, and find it rather hot, but I feel it's kind of presumptuous of you to state that you "already know the road to my ultimate pleasures", when you don't even know me. It feels like you're lumping every slave and submissive together, as though what might please one should surely please them all.

ccc3333 -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:47:15 PM)
Lol poise which picture was it?

littlewonder -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:48:56 PM)
Get rid of the mirror photo of your back. Delete the dom scowl picture. Looks like you're trying to have a bowel movement or you're really angry at someone.

TheLilSquaw -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:49:37 PM)
I don't see any changes in the context of your profile. Perhaps you haven't changed it.

ccc3333 -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:52:14 PM)
i did change the context... talked quite a bit about my likes and things i do in the "vanilla" life quote: ORIGINAL: TheLilSquaw I don't see any changes in the context of your profile. Perhaps you haven't changed it. Back picture coming down... haha the scowl is interesting though, do i really have to smile?

poise -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:57:55 PM)
It was the "scowl" picture I liked best actually, and I see it up clearly now. You do see how this could be a frustrating exercise for you though, yes? Every woman is going to have a different opinion than the next one. Making sure you have a balance of kink and vanilla interests is probably the best advice you'll get, and in which most women will agree.

littlewonder -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 5:59:38 PM)
Personally if I was looking for someone...yup. I want someone who is happy. If I see a scowl, the first thing I'm gonna think is he's an unhappy man or he thinks that to be a dom he has to be cold and angry, neither of which I find attractive.

ccc3333 -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 6:00:18 PM)
Point taken, i have 100's of pics so... ill try 2 others and u vote for which 1. Thanks quote: ORIGINAL: littlewonder Personally if I was looking for someone...yup. I want someone who is happy. If I see a scowl, the first thing I'm gonna think is he's an unhappy man or he thinks that to be a dom he has to be cold and angry, neither of which I find attractive.

littlewonder -> RE: Criticism for my profile... (12/27/2012 6:01:58 PM)
That's up to you. Poise said she likes it. so maybe keep it and post at least another one of you with at least a fun or smiling look.

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